SLiK ~vs~ DanA
 

unlimited barz
3-0 KO
5 to win
keep it real
no d/r, hata, or crew votes
u spit 1st

decapate ur facials after i brain ur pecker..
nock ya out the box so hard, yo next battle is u vs space sectors..
first W to my record/
celebrate over ur corpse..
yo basic mind N lines, vs deez dope thoughts..
with ruff kneez, like you suck before u faught..
trying to hold back yo setences like a
public court/
too late, u've now entered the movement..
having u saying what da hell Dane doing..
cuz i roll low over you, reclining and cruisin..
equal with da eagle so fuck a sequal, u lossin/
pound down to flesh dust..
open stomach gutz..
plainters fallin out ur nuts..
with ur head deep gashly cut..
so how u plan to holla back, with ur living
ability is now shut/




upp

ight bitch lets go...

this shit i spit is full of complexity//
so dont even try bitch cuz u cant handle me//
cuz right now, i'm laughin at what i see//
i see a pussy that doesnt now how to rap//
i see a pussy thats deserves a fuckin slap//
i see a pussy whos spit comes out like crap//
dont mess wit me, cuz i also see my glock//
cuz my rhymes masta this block//
take one look at me and my fuckinrocks//
no wonder u a dane cuz u do look like a dog//
cuz ur spit comes out like a motha fuckin slop//
do us all a favor and go back to ur day job//
hey, you gettinscared yet?
im sorry "dane" do u need a "vet" yet?//
are u sick of me, are u fed up yet?//
im sorry "dog" but i could go on for hours and hours//
cuz as u see, i got more then talent, i got magical powers//


payce..."dane"

Uppin on this wonderful battle humanvs "great dane"

vote dana

slik you need to work on your complexoty and flow
punches were a lil better but you need to elevate


dana... that really wasnt very good, you just edged it out

a rematch would be advised for you slik cause if you work on what I said you can win

peep my battle vs silver dolla ya'll

QUIT SLEEPIN!

yo dont forget to put it in the polls either dawgs

uppin

cmon homies, dont sleep

sounds herbish

both verses were pretty weak........but Dane edged this one out wiht more wordplay and punches:::::

with ruff kneez, like you suck before u faught..

^^^^^^^
best line

Slik::::do what Chrit said

Vote: Dana

Aight......shit is weak but i have to go with whoever had tha best overall verse...

Vote Danna

Ps: Slik...i have seen better ones from you....

Holla at tha ~WAR LORDS~try outs

is see alot of potential in you

my vote goes to slik, on acount of dis was a weak battle overall,
like the only thing he had goin for him was the i see pussy lines, to me dat was da only thing that stood out in dis battle, u both should elavate

vote=slik
reason=better punches
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