lil freestyle! check it
 

yo yo
you couldn't hold me down even if ya name was gravity
maintain to savagely ravish the game and fakes who battle me
no battery just assaults on folks who want the tradgedy
the majesty step into my kingdom bring ya calvary
my power be killin emcees i see they cowardly
sayin they'd devour me but they skills is sour gee
they need some new shit exclusive like a clue mix
my heart is dark wit blu drips i rip on dudes who think they ruthless
it's lucas sickning in the booth i got you pukin
bazooka words im shootin im showin all who the truth is
the rest useless never compare to the best music
step to shit stretch necks like compressed two bricks
the ses bandit blast you wit the wes left handed
cant stand it make a mess when my text demanded
next you stranded bandaged when im causin extra damage
they always jet and never manage keep respect to brandage
KAL be the set always kept it thorough
three philly soldiers got up and left they burrow
ses deniro weed and money smoke the profit
kid it aint a funny joke get you smoked like wok bitch
glue ya eyes to my shoes watch ya throat get drop kicked
get socked quick you all sweet soaked in chocalate
ropin rockets fast pace not actin slowly
any bitch ass dudes actin wack can blow me

that was hot
dont let nobody tell you it needs improvements

dude, thats one of the best rhymes ive seen posted yet...keep it up bro, u got it

Crazy nigga
Much props

it was coo
keep writin

tight shit yo, peep mine "tight beat"