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PACO 04-20-03 11:03 PM

i lost my mind part 3
 
i don't have to tell you this again/
cus nigga this is the end/
it's that plain i've gon insane/
everything i was i ain't never gettin it back i lost it in the brain/
it's like Cypress Hill said insane in tha membrane/
i guess this is good-bye to the game,the fame,my dream to entertain/
look at me i'm a discrace to this place/
is this somethin i could ever replace/
could i ever retrace my steps and my mistakes/
could i bring back all those dead bodies from the lakes/
i tried asking for forgiveness/
the only thing i was left with was my lonelyness/
being an outkast made me go crazy/
i didn't do anything about it i guess i must be lazy/
please believe me i'm tryin to change/
shit i'm not use to this feelin its really strange/
the doctor gave me some pills to control my anger/
i forgot to take them and now ya life is in danger/

that's all i could hink of right now it was somethin quik
so give me some feedback

PACO 04-21-03 11:30 PM

ay yo quit sleepin i need some feedback

peace

PACO 04-22-03 08:35 PM

uppin

PACO 04-22-03 10:59 PM

please give me feedback

Slik 04-23-03 10:53 AM

this was ight...ur flow was pretty good, alittle off in some places...Keep spittin yo...i see potential in you, payce


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