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DaviD WoRdplay 04-22-03 02:46 PM

[.Hit The Snooze.]
 
I wrote this right now because there is too much sleeping in the Open Mic forum.....

Time to hit the snooze on those who refuse to take a peak
Posting threads weak enough for heads to kill in my sleep
They freak when they see tweaked replies in their thread
I said it before… Rest in Peace to the Open Mic, its dead
Handfed these niggas Illness & they still won’t swallow it
Digested lines are Dope but they still couldn’t follow it
More hallow tips is what these net thugs want to hear about
Can’t get ‘em to listen to real shit with glued ears to mouth
Too feared to shout, I whisper the words that lure demons out
Redeem the mount that contains the beast, never seen the count
Most rhyme profound, Merk swiftly and without making a sound
You weightless fucks don’t match up pound for pound
These hounds go down on the God. Still not fucking around

Bmack 04-22-03 03:25 PM

I'm not sleepin on this flow, This was tight, I like your style kid

kinky69 04-22-03 03:35 PM

I like... not too many like you my friend...

DaviD WoRdplay 04-23-03 03:28 PM

naw, I was bored and thought i'd write a quick one on the sleepers in here

WORD~PERFECT 04-23-03 03:32 PM

when we collabing twin we would sounf tight

AngelicSheShe 04-24-03 12:50 PM

Yup that's the truth! Too many sleepers Nice peice.. OoNnEe

BlUnT-MC 04-24-03 01:02 PM

yea, I agree.. sleepers are dick-shines... I liked the flow, and some of the wordplay.. your topic was needed in here too..

Atetrack define' 04-24-03 01:22 PM

foreal meta i got you on this one,im sick of cats sleeping on my shit,well they aint sleeping but they sure as hell are bein lazy cats,i get so many veiws and so very few posts its crazy what the ratio between the two is at,funny how youve done a quick spit and automatic you get replies nahmean,and i do a peice that is long nad every cat doesnt bother to read coz they lazy,aint sayin there nothin wrong with your spit i agree with you totally but it jsut annoys me nahmena...anyway,shits needed get these fuckers the fuck outta,here ,prolly gangsta fools that dont understand words with more then two sylables,anythign beyond the words glock,nine,pump,guage,forty,wip,bitch,ho and weed they dont seem to comphrehend,but its their problem...i aint wanting their comments if they aint being bothered to elevate themselves.
bismillah

DaviD WoRdplay 04-28-03 03:45 PM

^^ i feel what you're sayin'

g3n3sis 04-28-03 04:13 PM

Fosure .. great use of lyrics for a " quick rap " and also the lyrics have real meaning's very well done.


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