What i wrote, might be related to most of you
 

This is true....I'm letting all of my feelings out...I think you will all find that this is all somehow related to you....

have u ever felt so hurt, it hurts so bad u feel lik u been beatin?
have u ever felt so hyrt, u wake up in da middle of the night bearly breathin?
have u ever felt so hurt, that u walk around and u feel weaked...

This is to all the homies with hard home life
this is to my homies that wanna give up and cant see the light.

I felt the same way, everyday i wanted to give up
everyday id look in the mirror, iw as so fuckin fed up

iknow ur suppose to show respect for yo family
but these fuckin people cant even handle me

I want to tell all yall to never let life get to you
you gotta keep going, no matter what you do

ima tell you right now, dont take that knife
ima tell you right now, dont take ur own life

i have it all, i have those burises and slit wrists
it was all so bloody, it would make any murderer sick...

but i realized life isnt about dieing right away
and i realized, i dont have to die today

and you should realize there is so much more than this
i mean look at everyone on here, u have a chance to be a rap artist...

so dont let the past bring you down
dont let the past bring ur smile to a frown

Keep it real, keep it tight...
Keep it together, each day and night...


Replies please

uppin

please, replies please

ummm.. I don't relate to any of that.. the only hardships I had were street problems, my family never drove me to suicide.. I wouldn't even think of it.. survival is all I'm concerned about.. but over all it was an alright piece.. I liked the have you ever been hurt part... it sounded cool..

i can relate but not entirely, not suicide never that
it was a nice piece

its not wha ti really meant...its just something i wrote

i thought it was a tight piece
keep rappin dawg

peace

ay yo can you give me feedback on my new verse "i lost my mind part 3"

preach on man, preach on... lol... nah I'm joking man...
this was ok, I guess...
It was pretty simple and all,
Flow could have been better,
But I did like the messege...
People could relate... not to everything... but some... like stress and all that shit...

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that was a good piece dawg
keep rappin, you got potential
people can relate, ive had a lot of murder in my family
and i can relate to this.

Thanks

Fiori

thanks for uppin yall