i need help with my style
 

can sum1 help me with my rappin style any advice is great

be witty, be funny, use wordplay. make da other cat sound stupid. use metaphors and expand yo vocab. observe a few battles and see whats goin on. see what other cats is doin and then apply yo own shit to that. itll come.
as fo pure style, no one can help wit dat cause dats just yo own talent...
just spit, and see what happens. experience'll help

best thing to do is watch other battles....Watch and learn

^^^^no one can help you with your style its somethign you have to devlope your self, unless you want to sound like everyone else