Dis a Battle I Did
 

yo dis a battle i did jus wanted yall ta get tha feel of ma punches ya kno if ya heard it b4 dats good for you but dis is vs. a guy named shiver on anotha site iight dis ma verse against him pure original!

Metaphors confusin dis kid now he cant battle cuz he's...lyrically stuck/
Dis batle gona give ya a bang fo ya buck...2 lines n dis kid already got struck/
think you ahead of da game lyrivally mentally n physically call ya self...da chief/
u worse den chunky chicken soup ya go to da store n buy 10 different guns...wen ya got no beef/
The end of this lyrical bombing is jus ur games...saturation point/
Leavin ya in so much smoke u think it's one of "Heavily Weeded's"...joint/
Chalengin me to a batle see ma verse n ya self esteem evaporates so swift/
Tryin ta spit as ya tremble wit fear as u see ma lyric demon ya comin at a...drift/
Grab tha beauty utencils to make up fo ya shortage of your...atrocious disses/
Even if ya fed off ma verse n stood 1 foot away from me ya punches wood stil be...misses/
spittin like if i was from alaska leave ya covered in spit u'll hav a continous..."shiver"/
"Lyrikal Swords" clashin n slashin now "cry me a river" wen i verbally...crack ya liver/

Nice drop.......Fam..........I always you had sick shit.....

thanx yo

oh shit... yeah man this a was decent battle... did you win?
Anyway... you had some good punches... decent flow, vocab, and good wordplay... you show some skill here man...
Keep rhyming...
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thanx yo n no i didnt win i guess dey werent feelin me on dis drop but its all good