" How Many": A quick song I wrote
 

"How Many"


{Verse 1}
Blame it on my mama I'm a thug to be
you wanna get your dada thats fine with me
It's gonna be some Mortal Kombat shit I'm gonna see you bleed
it might freak you out but it's normal to me
I've seen drive-bys I've been caught up in those bitches
richochet of the blade niggas die from the itches
Thugs do shit like that to get all the riches
they'll hit with a bat and leave you for the ditches
Rollin down the street nigga try to creep
to get pass me you really gotta creep
So you wanna be a dada
too bad there is no nana
Crizizone bana
I'm done with thee(you)

{Hook}
How Many times have I told your ass
How Many times have I showed your ass
How Many times have I kicked your ass
I told once before you'll never reach my class
How Many times have I told your ass
How Many times have I showed your ass
How Many times have I kicked your ass
I told you once before you'll never reach my class

{Verse 2}
Haters, Masturbators, and Master Debators
don't wanna see your ass cuz you a consinplater
Walkin around with a hole in your cheek
too bad the mutha fucka didn't make you sleep
If you wanna get payed I suggest you go to work
and never forget to whistle while you twork
He said somethin funny that made me go berserk
when I rocked him in the face a bitch called him a jerk
The words sound unique when I rap to the beat
instead of usin their hands niggas clap on their feet
Do you know what that means, cuz I don't know what it means
I guess it means you'll clap even if you're wearin blue jeans
I know what I just said didn't make any sense
but you know what makes sense is bliss in ignorance

{Hook}
How Many times have I told your ass
How Many times have I showed your ass
How Many times have I kicked your ass
I told you once before you'll never reach my class
How Many times have I told your ass
How Many times have I showed your ass
How Mant times have I kicked your ass
I told you once before you'll never reach my class

{Verse 3}
So you wanna start beef go ahead my nigga
against me fo' sho' you's a gonna nigga
Why are you doin Michael Jackson's tip-toe a lot quicker?
do the moonwalk nigga and a fake ass twister
Get the white glove to match his race
and spin your legs like windmills and keep up the pace
You see I ain't the one, to diss where you're from
but when you act like a fucked up nigga you is stunned
now get the gun carrier and a bullet proof vest
if you don't wanna come back with a hole in your chest
you see I keep it real, I'll never break a deal
get rich or die tryin man I know how it feels
I'm a professional nigga and you learnin the basics
you're in the unphenominal catagorie, or the niggas who's racist
only fucked up niggas try to get in the Outlawz
the mutha fuckin niggas who fuck in the waste stalls

{Hook}
How Many times have I told your ass
How Mant times have I showed your ass
How Many times have I kicked your ass
I told you once before you'll never reach my class
How Many times have I told your ass
How Many times have I showed your ass
How Many times have I kicked your ass
I told you once before you'll never reach my class

"I know what I just said didn't make any sense
but you know what makes sense is bliss in ignorance"
^that was my favorite line man... this actually wasn't that bad...
Alot of the rhymes are pretty simple though... so is the topic... it's been done... but you flowed decently with it... I guess thas your style... it sounds a bit like Big L's style... but that's my opinion... like I said, shit wasn't that bad... not all that... but not bad... keep spittin man...
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thanks dawg

This was aight..u got potential duke..
keep at it

thanx yall

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this drop was aight dawg , , u stayed on topic , , but u could have done better

i agree it was a good piece but you could've done better keep on writin' n you'll make another piece twice as better as this

thanx dawg

yea wat was said befo' u gotz potential if u put ya heart ta it , i kno u culd rip it up, aight im out, mak sur ta return tha fava and check out my drop, "dear dad" much love,

Yo pretty good rhymin ... return the favour drop a message at ma rhyme
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=42217

Thanx yall

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