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kinky69 04-23-03 12:29 PM

Downtown
 
They still be after me but they ain't seen my stash//
No, I ain't be talking about no dolls, no dildo's or no cash//
They want my herb n' my coke//
Who the fuck are they kiddin' they can't even handel a toke//
Peeps say that what I do is wrong//
I shouldn't be dealing, I am a girl, I should be showing off my thong//
Playing life like I played the last guy//
Too fucked to care, I play life high//
But I dun care, lifes all good//
I'm stoned fine, like the way I should//

Pigs suspect me//
And brothers respect me//
Its called a game, a game called life//
It's like a dart game, no darts, but a knife//
You'll aim for a bulls-eye and end up wit five//
But's it all good, you still would be alive//
But what happens when the games over and time is done//
But once you realize you lost could you say you had fun?//

Bmack 04-23-03 12:39 PM

Constructive criticism, I have to say that your rhymes are decent but you need to stop with the fillers, take your time. But good drop nonetheless


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