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whitemagic865@hotmail.com

Tense..
heart skips a beat
cant trust no one....gotta watch out for the heat
cant jsut keep runnin from the police
so whats neccasary to survive
might not see me again so this is how i say good bye
jumpin outa the window
got it all...it all planned out
but when it comes night dont know where ima go
feelin like a lil kid thats bout to pout
but ill make it there with outa doubt
the mo u hold me back
the mo i ppush foward
clothes..money... got it all packed
i got angels along with me along with the lord
you think u can control me
i aitn no puppet you can control witha cord
you must think you da puppet master
right now ima just a crakin peice of plaster
but ima startin to crack
with no support
youll find me in the juvey courts
cuffs, police
dont scare me
cuz..
ima fearless jp

with every step
i seem to lose a breathe
somtins holdin me back
maybe ima waitin for a second chance
but ima gone and thats a fact
cant sleep at night
peeps stop to ask me if im aight
NO!!
it aitn just alright
prob gonna be layin under the stars..ona park bench
eyes closed..with that knife in ma right hadn clenched
ready to sliop the thumb
and send the blade roaring
like its a bullet outa a gun soaring

tic toc
304 strikes the clock
the bell rings
blring blirng,....blring
prob just walkin the plank
i have no idea as to of how much ma expositin will cost
you put a hole through me an now ive sank
hand cuffs, jail cells
knifes and nines
only a matta a time
befo they find me
but until then
joy the time alone
but ur the one who drive the spike
and im the one who decided to take the hike

i think that i did a good job on it can yall tell me somtin on whether it just scked or what???

its alright.