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..::Blaze Session's::..
yeh you know the dill, you want us to peep your verse BUT NOT VOTE and give our commenting on it post a link here.
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check this out and please give me some feedback.....
i thought it was a good battle ,... one http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=40959 |
From my R.B.B.L. battle ...... Let me know
http://63.219.149.14/forum/showthre...&threadid=39807 Some reason I get numbers instead of the name rapbattles.... |
^^^...BreakDown...TS style...
"I got more Bars than penitentiary's your rhymes elementary// You beating me is like sayin mike Jackson had plastic surgery successfully"... You Opened With A played Bar...But Then Finished It Up Nicely With The MJ Joint... "Theres a method to my madness but I haven't figured it yet// Your minds in the clouds like a 7 foot russian space cadet"... Not Bad...Coulda ReWorded It A Lil...Still Not Bad Wordplay... "I'll terminate you like your Internet provider// with more deadly intent than those kids from Colorado"... So So...Might Fly Over Some Heads... "Hit You with a table and chair call me the chairman of the boards// I'll leave you strung out on rap like I was spittin guitar chords"... Not Bad Again...Point Made...Prolly The Best Coupla Bars In Ya Verse... "Don't care whut your name means and its only fair// Cuz in my win column there'll just be a number there// Please don't get defensive and bad mouth me// cuz this aint JerrY Springer, Steve can't help you B..." Pretty Much Filler Material...Kinda Simple...Jerry Is Played... "I'm comparing you to a game on my Atari system// so I can say you played out before anybody listened..." ReWorded and A Lil More Thought...You Coulda Killed Em With Those Bars... "I'm like a cheat sheet I come correct// My words are hot even when I'm doin a mic check// Bring you back to '92 kid Protect yo neck//" Really didn't Finish Up To Strong...If AnyThing...You Want To Make A Statement With Ya Opening and Closing Bars...Keep Ya Readers Attention... Jus TS'z 2 Cents... |
check this out,,,,,,please and i need opinions...
http://63.219.149.14/forum/showthre...&threadid=41469 |
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if u post a battle here u shud peep someone elses
otherwise there's just gonna be loads of links with no comments on them..... so i'll peep Chrits as it's after mine....... edit;shit it won't let me......... |
here's the break down for X
I'll Plow-Thru any "So Called Rapper" on this site, I Stay "Pumped" like Reebok's/ Even without a Beat-Dropped, I'll "Wear U Out" like Fat People who Speed-Walk/ ^good line with a good punch straight away usin half his brain, claim he's gonna grave "WHO?"/ please bitch...not even your memory card could save you/ ^liked this some originality its over...see X is lyrically sick/ damn you couldnt "Come Hard" IF YOU MASTURBATED WITH A BRICK/ ^the come hard lines are played out to the max dude needs to learn lessons, i'm raw in real essences/ battle ME, you get shook harder then Christmas presents/ ^coulda had a better punch to it son you really are killing me/ even if i had a body in BRAILE you still wouldnt be feelin me/ ^good but cuda said something about being blind to help the punch MUDEROUS, when words tossed in I drop bitches often/ you a NO NAME, watch me deal with this "NOBODY LIKE TUPACS COFFIN"/ ^wasnt really feeling this but thats probably cos i didnt get it...... Now be Honest-With-This, stop actin like this Rap shits All In The Wrist/ You-Gon-Diss? man You will be on the "Phone" with "Nicoderm" the way you be Callin-It-Quits/ ^good line nice punch So if ya wanna test what I'm speakin, this is just One Invitation/ Cause your rap's is Mathematic an I'ma Subtract it From The Equation/ ^maths lines are kinda played too....but was alright If you were compared to a bird id be yellin "Black hawk down"/ Cause your gettin removed faster than the Iraqi Generals home town ^not the strongest of finishes but decent......u won this already anyway........ |
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fgee thx alot on the feed bak i really appreciate it..1
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hey yo check out this blaze session
the best BS ive ever seen[pun intended] http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=41088 let me know what ya think |
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