title- broken feeling
 

(this is about my feelings to a personal expirence wit a girl that happend some what recently...that kinda hurts when i found ut the truth that she really was pullen an act...some insight would be appreciated)

title- broken feeling

was there reason to lie...
crumble the feeling i had for you...left inside
why did there have to be pain...
did you really have to bestow it upon me
why couldnt you just say no,
and let my feelings for you vanquish and be set free
for it bothers me to know it was all fake
when i all along thought is was real
i had found out it was an act
and that your feelings for me were all but a fact
so i just think was there a real motive for this to display
or can i let it all go and let my mind relax.
..get my mental finger of the image off replay

can i get some feedbak?

hmmm...short and too simple but direct to the point....came out straight from the heart...


its funny sometimes when we see people that are together...we think they are happy...but they really arent....conflicts and difficulties set their way as well...sometimes cuz one of them is havin some issues or confuse about what being "together" is all about...so they ended up making the wrong descisions and doing the unacceptable things that would hurt their partner's feelings...

bottom line....its not the end of the world....it happens to a lot of people so you're not alone....keep ur head up...


I liked the poem ...really feelin it...

Nice Poem....dawg

thx people...1

Nice one....asking the questions that everyone asks when they go thru this type of problem......

I can't quote a certain line because I feel that it was written to be quoted as a whole piece.....you really can't break it up...and this deserves to be accredited with more responses....

It is something that everyone goes thru and I really enjoyed the piece..... thank you for the read

no problem thx for the reply.....1

^^^ for some imput please...1

this is good,

like a crunchy burrito

yea, i understand this shit

leave the past in the past so im not gunna go into detail


as for the poem it was good, but everything can elevate, but it was aight

iight

^^^^