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DeJureThaRaw 04-23-03 04:28 PM

DejureThaRaw vs Jo Jo Tha Clown!
 
10 to 15 lines....
no recycled
no biting
3 vote is KO
5 wins
30 minute writing limit..so when you sign in..you got 30 minutes to make your verse...sign in and we will begin aiight

Jo Jo Da Clown!! 04-23-03 04:36 PM

jo Jo checkin in fo sure fo sure

honk honk

<starts juggling

DeJureThaRaw 04-23-03 05:08 PM

Round 1:

Usually I dont battle clowns, but its all ~Gravy~//can I have, an autograph...I'm a Huge fan of you & KayCee(KC and JoJo)//..but you ~Crazy-Crazy-Crazy~ for tryin to ~Play Me~/lol/
JOJO..you've acted like a real Dick ~lately~//I guess its cause you aint been in pussy since a NewBorn ~baby~//

So when your verse ~Drops-its-a-shame~//you need ~Alot-of-it-changed~//cause F*ckin Mr.Monopoly is tha Only time you'll be ~On-top-of-your-Game~//

Your verses... I'm glad there ~not-mine~//Cuase putting your clown lip-stick..on your Gonerea hit-lips..is the ~only time~..You'll ever MAKE UP a ~Hot Line~/ewww/

"Ladies and Gentlemen, JoJo the Clown is a ~Dead-Man~//"Oh NOoo-JO JOoo"... you couldnt see me even if I had a web cam/lol/

ItS a WrAp........1

Jo Jo Da Clown!! 04-23-03 05:12 PM

hang on, i didnt see that half hour shit, i aint used to that, gimme 10 and ill have something up

Jo Jo Da Clown!! 04-23-03 05:26 PM

Dejure your rhymes couldnt be Raw, if you spit with the skin removed from ya jaw,
Its obvious in this battle you will LOSE, like im beating you with athletic equipment, youll be sporting a bruise,
I cook ur beef so well, its impossible to chew, im sticking you for a win, like im spittin glue,

You should sign to def comedy jam cause your rhymes is a joke, your a hoax, you couldnt speak-ya-mind if i took-the-time to shove your brains down your throat,
Its like you got food caught in ya thraot, cause everytime you spit, your bound to choke,
If your pockets were made of titanium, they would still be broke, you couldnt spit dope, if you snorted and spit coke,
Dejure should beat off in front of a mirror, that way you can see your wack,
Wearing a straight jacket is the only time hes strapped, this is the first round, lets BET we dont see raw. come back around,
Infact, I wouldnt come around if I got beat down to the ground by an emcee named JO JO DA CLOWN

edited to fix html

DeJureThaRaw 04-23-03 05:29 PM

uppin for votes....1

Tiberius 04-23-03 05:31 PM

both of you are shit and hard to understand, especially the rymthing scheme......get over to Tiberius VS Iceburg to witness a flow and vote too

Jo Jo Da Clown!! 04-23-03 05:33 PM

Fuck you^^lets battle,,, that shit was a keystyle

the specialist 04-23-03 05:33 PM

You Both Need To Work On Ya Styles A Lil More...

DeJure...TS Felt As You Though You Tried To Force The Issue...Ya Rhyme Was Inconstant...And Basic At Times...

Clown...You Had A Lotta Played Material...Be More Original...NeverTheLess...

TS Voted For The Clown...Verse Was Just Betta OverAll...

DeJureThaRaw 04-23-03 05:50 PM

up 4 votes

DeJureThaRaw 04-23-03 05:59 PM

up

Haven 04-23-03 06:31 PM

Jo Jo Da Clown!! took it

Jo Jo Da Clown!! 04-23-03 07:08 PM

yo yo yo, its jo jo

Votes please.....quit being so harsh voters, dude gave me like 10 minutes to write :)

honk honk

The Cobra 04-24-03 10:57 AM

I gotta say, Jo Jo Da clown definatly put it down.
He smaked up that dude like his bitch when she comes around.
For all of those people who couldn't understand this, damn!
Learn how to read before you judge shit man!


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