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MC EnEmY vs Ripper
3 vote = KO
5 vote = Win (based on poll votes not written) 10-20 lines. |
u aint checked in yet.
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aight,
ur called MC Enemy but ur a faggot in all honesty/ wanna boost ur wins up by tryin 2 battle me/ but u didnt realize dat i'm on the verge on bein legendary/ u beating me comes no way near to being looked as reality// this is already a one way battle and its hardly even started/ cocksuckers like u think u battle like ur already full-hearted/ wake-up and look around coz ur vision is blurred and distorted/ stop dreaming coz ur aint as good as u think u r, u’ve just been deported/ i’m on another level and my rhymes gonna leave u deserted// ur no enemy, well maybe 2 a few faggots like you/ u cant compare 2 any1, ur a dickless faggot and that’s true// mu’fucka I’m gonna slaughter u and u aint even sed a word/ i’m gonna rip u apart, tear out ur heart, this shit may sound absurd/ but don’t try and battle me coz I spit ill rhymes that sound disturbed// fuck it, fake MC’s like u don’t deserve 2 read my lyrics/ this is the worst freestyle I’ve produced including the gimmicks/ but shit, its enuff 2 beat ur poor written pre prepared lyrics// its near the end of the road 4 u now and this has been lame/ this is the nineteenth line and I’ve put u 2 shame/ in this battle, I have now showed u how 2 play the game//. |
pretty poor i kno.
lookin 4 feedback on the verse plz. u have an hour now 2 post ur verse. |
alrite i'm checkin in.
verse comin up next |
yo, i'm gonna kill u nigga
dont make me pull this trigga we kno i'm da man dats bigga/ i'm the best of all u who think they flow my rhymes 2 so powerful, in the dark they glow ur just gay, bro/ i'm the best no one can contest MC'in is like me lickin a woman's breast no one can give me a worthy test/ i'm the MC EnEmY no one can compare to me i beat any one lyrically i'm just too big of a G! |
i gotta go out 4 a bit now but i'll b on later 2 check out my victory!
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VOTE: Ripper
WHY: Mc's verse was prety wack!, Rip' used decent rythme scheme, flow etc... keep elevatin though! |
wot da fuck was dat kid on?!
that verse was shit! someone plz vote on this so it can be over and dun wit. and i thought my verse was poor! |
thanx man
1-0 uppin' |
vote=ripper....reason=mcenemy is gay......his lyrics proved it
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well done u got the ko
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thanx man
2-0 uppin 4 one more 4 KO. poll vote says 3-0 so sum1 needs 2 explain their vote. thanx and keep votin, i want a massive win over this bitch! i'll check out ur battles aswell if u explain ur vote. |
wel i voted cuz e was shit so its explained
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