ill short piece
 

i see alotta yall speaking a good-game..
sum is aight the rest is lame..
i show you how to dis son, just
observe dane..
fo those who been here long enuff,
you seen the frame..
tell these newbs about the ass, and
the hips.............plain insane..
the face, 1 in a kind..not the
same..
and yall chose to jack off on deez fem mc
with faded glory outfits and
plastic chains..

was an aiight lil spit,mad short but you got your point across.
bismillah

^^you read the verse? lmao... look here, if you gonna do an open mic try to like, write an actual song or verse that you put some real effort into... this was just not worth posting... next time put some effort cause you just not tryin hard enough... keep rhymin

this was whack , , expand ur vocab and metas

see when i saw the name i thought it said like 2 posts haha,so need the encouragement,plus i jsut kinda glanced over it coz it was so short no effect,re reqading it,then re reading you have 210 posts,theres no way this could be counted as a decent effort...blah! my bad ahhaha

that was okay. A bit short for the liking, but I thought it was good. peaz.