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evilbombsquad 04-26-03 01:54 PM

greater then evil
 
bitches best short 2 quiver from this modern day Jack the Ripper
for i be the last standing antichrist so full of hate im backing Hitler
wack emcees can only pull hoes in tug of war games with strippers
i was once a true lyrical sinister that evolving too a hateful spitter
dedicating words 2 those u doubt suicide as noone likes a quitter
this mind bomb is everything that details what you find in life wrong
man was programed to stay in line in the fear of the wraith of god
find it so odd when machines rebuilt the lost fear in a nuclear bomb


:) big brother is still watching


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shiznit 04-26-03 04:22 PM

hmmm..not that good...common concept..war..hate..life...

its interesting tho but the fact that it confuses me on some parts...its kinda allright....

but that tight work...keep it up

bitchslaper 04-26-03 05:53 PM

u sound like ya related to bush

varentao 04-26-03 10:01 PM

^^^But Bush is a devout Christian of sorts..and couldn't say half of those words....



Anyway, felt the piece didn't have as much as it could've had in it. Flow was too rigid. Approach seemed akward. Had it's moments, and message was at times portrayed strongly.

But overall, not to yohr usual standard.

...resp...

The Necromancer 04-27-03 12:45 AM

Bush could hardly say half those words because he has trouble pronouncing anything with more than one syllable.

Anyway, this peice of yours had a standard basicnicity about its format. Rhymes were okay. Imagry and stuff I had the idea of what you where trying to come across with.

And yes. Big brother is watching. He is right over my shoulder. Say hello.

~Shalom~

varentao 04-27-03 08:19 AM

Quote:
Originally posted by The Necromancer
Bush could hardly say half those words because he has trouble pronouncing anything with more than one syllable.



Heh, yeah, that was what i was trying to say, like....(!)....

evilbombsquad 04-29-03 02:11 AM

^^^huh ya all got me confused. either or thanx foe the replies. sorry if i let any of ya down this was just a free write taken from $!!. so stay up and stay lifted from smoking herb, as i be so sky high im tokin with birds :)

lol neva mind i got it. varentao that was quick witt

Dez 05-01-03 02:11 AM

this was different


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