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Mind Theory vs. Dejuretharaw
10 lines max
no dick hate bs crew votes are allowed but must be well explained first to 5 3-0 Ko blah blah blah blah blah blah Verses due 90 minutes from the time that Dejuretharaw checks in. agreed. check in |
..start writting....but I dont see why it would take you 90 minutes..to keystyle 10 lines...and i dont like that crew votes ish either...but if there explained very good its coo...1
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cause first of all im not "keystyling" it. and second of all im doin other shit too. good luck.
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get ready for a merking...ithink yall kno who im talkn bouts gettin merked......can yall peep ma battle while yall waiting......1
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...2688#post382688 |
3rd battle today..LeTs Go
Mind Theory It SEEMS FOUL, that you would even BREATHE NOW//its good that your PreWriting...cause even if **Gucci** made your CPU SPEEDDAIL, you wouldnt have a good KEY-STYLE// your getting ,a head of yourself,but thats because I sent you your SKULL....SCARY!!!//and also cause all of your lines are the same, like you was sponcored by **BUL.BERRY**// but by the time you DO SEE ITS ON, ya BOTTIE BE GONE//cause your lines wouldnt connect...even if they made a pattern for **LUI VATON**// so now WE KNOW, YOUR FLOW..has something in commen with all these FLASHY CLOTHES//SO, after I go, you'll just walk out..likes HO'S in FASHION SHOWS/whoa/ Lets Go like first time smokers, this must be that first *L* you were SEEKING//in this battle I'm TEACHING..1.0.1..like your Record,WILL SEEM, after this BEATING(10-1)// ItS a WrAp......1 |
explained votes plz..no d.ryding..like X ecution just did..1
and hurry up MT...you PreWriter.... use this when voting peeps meta multi punches wordplay flow tecnique creativity thanx 1 |
A lil somethin somethin . . .
This wack emcee gets "chewed" like "candy". Fuck effort . . . I let my bars merk/ This cats thinks he's "famous" . . . well I'm about to make this "Star-burst"// The only fan that you'll ever have's spinning above you're bed/ "Readjusting cocks" for your mouth is the only way that you "turn heads"// My bars will ring ya head, now all you hear is "Bells" like "Jingle"/ You act like you got money piles . . . the only "stacks" you see are "Pringles"// Dejure you're wack, your only hope of ever getting "bars" is "crime"/ Your verse was a "horror" kid, you're giving me "Goosebumps" like "R.L. Stine"// Your whole verse was a joke, no point in making fun of your rhymes/ Dejure wants to get "served quick" . . . so he's at the <<< "front of this line"// explained votes plz..no d.ryding..like X ecution just did..1 1) X Ecution wasnt dickryding he didnt even say a name. He coulda been saying Ima get merked.! and hurry up MT... 2) If you didnt like the rules you shouldn't have agreed to em. I can take as much time as I feel like as long as I post within the time limit. you PreWriter.... 3) You must be an idiot, if I prewrote it I would have posted it before yours . . . cause It would have already been written! Duhh . . . kids . . . use this when voting peeps meta multi punches wordplay flow tecnique creativity 4) It will help, but votes not done like this will still count. You should have stated that before we dropped our verses . . . Anything else . . . . ? uppin! edited for spelling:confused: |
dumba*s, you said it ya self..that you a prewriter
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thats what i was talking about...and he was talking about you..cause he dont know me...D.RYDER owell F*ck it..up 4 votes 1 |
This wack emcee gets "chewed" like "candy". Fuck effort . . . I let my bars merk/
This cats thinks he's "famous" . . . well I'm about to make this "Star-burst"// tight line.... vote Mind T way better punches DeJureThaRaw like first time smokers, this must be that first *L* you were SEEKING//in this battle I'm TEACHING..1.0.1..like your Record,WILL SEEM, after this BEATING(10-1)// that wa ur only good punch line work on them punches |
i could easily go ahead and quote all of Theory's lines but I ain't going too.....theres no reason for that.......Mind came out I.L.L. and ended I.L.L. and that ain't no dick rydin'......thats strait up.........his whole shit ate Dejures up......but yeah.....good battle
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yall hit up my battle wit Kayoss
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vote- mind straight murder....shoulda be arrested for the crime....nuff said 1
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hmmmm Sicc asss battle bof came sick but ima go with DEJURE his shit had better punches... n his shit was moire original.. mind u had lotta played out shit like this
T"his wack emcee gets "chewed" like "candy". Fuck effort . . . I let my bars merk/ This cats thinks he's "famous" . . . well I'm about to make this "Star-burst"// The only fan that you'll ever have's spinning above you're bed/ "Readjusting cocks" for your mouth is the only way that you "turn heads"//" the start burst shit is madd played n so is the fans on ceilin shit vote - dejurtheraw can yall vote on ROUX VS CON thnks |
its all good.
KO. good battle Dejure. peace. 13th ima peep ya shit now. |
Im gonna have to give it to mind because he had more punches.
Dejure "like first time smokers, this must be that first *L* you were SEEKING//in this battle I'm TEACHING..1.0.1..like your Record,WILL SEEM, after this BEATING(10-1)//" was you only good line. Good battle though. Dejure i've seen you spit harder. |
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