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shiznit 04-26-03 03:59 PM

letting go.....
 
We often fool ourselves
And say its love
Only cause when its gone
We end up being lonely
So how are we to know
That it just isn’t so
That we just have to let each other go


There were many times
When we shared precious moments
But later realized they were only stolen moments
So how are we to know
That it just isn’t so
That we just had to let each other go


If loving you is all that means to me
When being happy is all I hope ud be
Then loving you must mean
I really have to set you free

Each day we meet my love for you
Keeps growing stronger
But everytime we meet
Makes leaving you so much harder
So how are we to know
That this just wasn’t so
That we just have to let each other go


Letting go is not an easy task
When smiling feels like I must wear a mask
It hurts deep inside
And I just cannot hide
That there’s anguish at the thought
That we should part

Phantasia 04-26-03 06:54 PM

All you need is some good music and You got a hit!

Acidic 04-26-03 08:48 PM

yo tis was deep i liked it how u got to point on how love is hard to control and u cant kepp hold of it even wen its not there i liked tis one and ima check tha otha one u did so keep it up girl i might drop one in here real soon

varentao 04-26-03 09:49 PM

First off, let me just say, with no offence intended - your avater thing annoys me. Not very much, but just a bit. I remember playing that game when i went around my parents house and played it with my sister. It's annoying how they're always moving around like that, like 'retards' needing to take a piss, even when talking to someone or just doing nothing.

But anway, enough of that.

I liked the piece. Had a nice flow to it. A kind of deep, mellow emotional thing going on too.

End wa alright, but felt it maybe, just maybe, could've been better. But it's all good...

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