havent done this in a while
 

Havent done one of these in forever... Tell me what you think...:D

Steady stressin' with no sense on direction/
Roaming through life with a perplexed complexion/
Holding feelings in, pray for a confession/
Can’t take many more of life’s lessons/
What doesn’t kill you makes you stronger/
To hell with that, I don’t want to be here any longer/
Hitting the walls, throbbing with animosity/
Fuck the cat, and its curiosity/
The settlers came and created a city/
The place where everyone acts cold and shows no pity/
Ruthless and'll do whatever it takes/
I feel out of place in this bed of snakes/
Kicking over my ladder along with my hopes/
The angels came down trying to show me the ropes/
Tied it around my neck, turns out they were rivals/
Flew away prior to slapping me with the bible/
Influenced by my surroundings/
Can’t escape stress, feel him at the door pounding/
Pretend to not be home, but get robbed by greed/
Can’t pay attention to all, jump upon my trusty steed/
Slowly light him up and inhale his ashes/
Living life in the stopped lane, everyone passes/
Passes on to being CEO's and general managers/
Can’t make contact, just labeled as a damager/
Family gone, no where to be found/
Here comes my steed again, in the form of a pound/
He’s improved since last time, got 10 cents but cant afford a dime/
Scrawling on pieces of paper to relieve the feelings/
Stuck on the hook and the fisherman’s reeling/
Keeling, over with laughter/
Angry sheriff saying it’s his daughter I’m after/
Could go to school but I failed the entrance exams/
Was once an acquaintance with death, but we had a falling out/
Tried to get into his house, arrived at the courtyard and got kicked out/
I'm asking why? Just points his thin fingers behind me/
Hiding in the shadows? Light can you find me?/
Everything is alive can you feel the motion/
Can’t feel anything, drink down the potion/
Its been going on too long begin the long journey back to sanity/
Cant travel the roads, white coats are after me/
Divert to the forest, I can see sanity now/
Wait I’m in a desert, the white coats closing in now/
Injected into my veins a temporary fixation/
Strapped to the bed, I begin my contemplation/
Am I really here? Or suspended in a space station/
Life gone by, at the drop of a hat/
Cant anyone here me? If you can, tell me where sanity’s at/

contructive criticism please... drop links to your open mics and i'll be sure to reply :D

was preety good,

"Keeling, over with laughter/
Angry sheriff saying it’s his daughter I’m after/" - LMAO

ohh... party inspired by the following
1. depression
2. vanilla sky (the movie)
3. pootie tang (the movie)
4. aesop rocks bantering on dryspell

my man, that shit was dope and with a little funny mix. Your still a smoking gun homie..keep on trying out this incredible gift you have.you words is like lightning striking..

^^lmao... i thought about sticking a "wha ta ta" in there... but thats a little too much pootie tang in there...

haha^^ No doubt, one a ya best Inspire, back to reppin K.I Dogg, thats some trippy dope shit..Keep it uppin..

Peace Out Yo!!!!

feeling this...
the topic was creative and ILL...
overall, a very skillful piece..

uppin cause theres people in the forum again!

thats was the shit dawg

liked ur style

tippie tay my paddie meees.
whatever that means ahahha shits funny as fuck,nice spit inspire liekd the sheriffs daughters line was fucnny as fuck you a witty cat...dryspell is an awesome song foreal.ima bee looking for your next hit single " "...hahah ai love that fucking movie,i want a magic belt and shit.

check my new release "biggie shorty" :D... lmao

up up and away!

wha ta tay mey sadatay tippi taiss.......

^^^you more of a freeposter than me lmao
:whacky:<<<dopest smiley on rb.. spread the whacky