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PACO 04-27-03 02:33 PM

plz give me feedback
 
this is just somethin short so plz gie me some feedback


i'm sick of people starin at me like i'm some kind of freak/
all my life i've been treated like some kind of geek/
i've had it up to here you see the difference in me and now i see fear/
why can't you just treat me like a normal peer/
it's too late i gave you niggas a chance to accept my personality/
now you about to see my capability/
i'ma make sure you recognize me cus this is me and it's not a disguise/
i know you'll realize i'm a normal person in ya eyez/
i show respect why can't i get it back/
i know my shit is wack and that's a matter of fact/
now everybody is afraid to aggravate me/
all i want is to be appriciated and just let me be/
this is me sayin good-bye to my worthless life/
i'ma end this pathetic strife with this butcher knife/

peace

plz give me feedback

Bash 04-27-03 03:50 PM

This drop was aight ,, but i think u could have done better , , keep droppin..........


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