W4: Optikal Iluzion Vs. Anonymis Jones
 

Match up: Sunday
Check in by: Tuesday
Verses by: Friday

30 line max.
no hate/dick ryder votes.
no senseless beef.

Good luck.

in, peace

Aiyyo, i'm checkin in

(Anonymiz Jonez steps out of the shadows and grabs the mic)

I’m takin u to school, and guess what, it’s lunchtime/
I’ll straightened u out wit “punches” to create a “punchline”/

When I spit i'm causin “optikal iluzions”/
Him “seein” me is the real fuckin “iluzion”/

You need to “pump yo brakes” like “parked cars”/
My words will make you moma wanna do the crip walk//(he is from Cali)

Me vs. you is like “ass to dicks”/
Talk “shit” I'll have you feelin “fucked” quick/

I read ur battles, analyzed ur content/
Honestly, u ain’t worth half the time u spent/

Are u half mule, cause ur rhymes are half-assed/
Only way people will fill u is if u came in their ass/

U would know more about those awkward ass situations/
Dressin drag for masturbation inspiration/

Aiyyo, ur ass jus been “bitch slapped” nigga/
Time 4 u 2 check in to the “wackness emergency center”/

While ur comtemplating what 2write and shit/
Remember, it's betta to remain silent//

(Anoymiz Jonez Steps back in to the shadows laughing)

Damn am waitin for Optikal...ama vote

Vote on mine vs Syn please

yo,check it,
u go "in and out" of shadows like an insecure fag//
whats the matter "bitch" are u on ur "rag"?//
steppin to me is like comtting suicde, check the tag//
the true rhyme bender here to "tax" ur ass like a "money lender"/
only shadows that u "come out" from is ur "clos-et"//(closet)
thats right ur a fag but u dont really know-it//
all this talk bout dicks, with with the obsession?//
cumshots and ass-fucking, ur gay and homie u aint messin//
after im done with u, u will be "anoymiz" cuz no one remembers whack rappers when they are gone from da scene//
son, ill lyrically SMACK and ATTACK u so hard you be screaming "stop daddy, ur mean!"//
the only "brakes that are pumpin" are the ones tryin to stop u from the GUY that ur humpin//
bitch, u have no place in RBBL//
just "quit the game", like "kids at the recess bell"//
battle number 2 is done bitch, see you in hell

~*~*~*~OUT

uppin for votes peeps comon

Niether of these verses were too hot:::

I’ll straightened u out wit “punches” to create a “punchline”/

^^^^
Only line of the whole battle that i liked::::::

Optikal: you fed off your opponets verse too much, it needs to be more raw

Vote: Jones

Anonymis Jonez Wins...

Anonymis[2-0]

Optikal[1-1]