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W4: DirtyShanks Vs. KillaKobra
Match up: Sunday
Check in by: Tuesday Verses by: Friday 30 line max. no hate/dick ryder votes. no senseless beef. Good luck. |
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I checked in yesterday, but I guess it didn't register... |
Its Goes A Little Something Like This
Yo Dirty Shanks is the guy who sees Jay Pana n suddenly wanks A buttered knive aint gonna save ya life cuz face it you commited lyrical suicide The deph~InIt~Ion of you is wack in the rapbattles verbal dictionary Limited is ya vocabulary n to win this battle ya better pray to god n say a hell mary After this battle ya styles gon be like ya face needin abit of a re-arrangment Cuz face it im gonna send you to a different type of one- nation basement A place where evey wack mc knows ya face n even they feel in disgarce The shanks are placed n there gettin too tight Ima leave you lookin like Justin Timberlake in a late night bar fight Man ya listen to 50 so ya think ya cool Man ya lyrics remind me of a no-body rapper named ja fool Ya flow aint dirty its just fuckin all over the place Ya like a sub woofer that produces no muh fukkin bass This is Line number 14 man you'd make the wack lyrical dream team Man ya spit the rappin alternative to a nursery rhyme You define a defeat in front lines Now thiss RBBL verse is over like ya carrer Killa Kobra jus droped now you'll be livin in fear |
I'll be sure to peep this when dirty drops
dont worry about crew vote.. I explain my votes peep me vs waur as well |
yo shanks couldn't post hiz verse before tha due date 'cuz he gotta work out sum issuez.
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so do i win or what??
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Sorry, I'm on leave from tha Navy, so I can see my family...
I could not post at tha time I was needed. I will do my verse now, and if it counts Thank You for understanding.. I try'd to let it be known, and posted in my crew forum real quick. I had to go, I mean Real Fast, I had no time at all.. I'll be postin' really soon, just smoke a cig and I'll get to it.. |
k then im down but we'll need some quick votes
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*I do all this stupid shit to make my verse look really cool, all tha cool guys do it. Yo Yo Yo grabs tha mic that aint there, YoYOyOYO tokyo hoe!! looks at an invisable crowd, starts feelin tha intense heat from tha peeps... I begin to DROP THIS... Yo YO Yo!!*
...........HA! Killa don't know he battles wack spit, I guess kk's just.. to lagit to quit!.. duk can't touch this, even if he was an MC wit a hammer lookin' pist!!.. but he get's pissed on & drenshed by tha only hot flow he ever felt!.. I can't do nothin else to Kobra, so I'll make tha snake kill its-self!!.. tha weakest link to claim Pro, and continues to think he brings pain?!.. Damn right, ya rhymes would hurt any duk that loves to wright tight!.. Word is Bond and I'll shoot some advice, Killa's... Stay tha Fuck outta sight!!.. Man.. I couldn't be more nice, so I'll beat ya once and not think about twice!!.. kk does research on my type, WTF ya wanna find a book about my life?!.. I'll hook ya up.. with spit's that kats like, lickin' Butter off tha tip of my knife!!.. His punches don't connect, no way you’ll win this after I stomp ya dell!.. Kobra's wreck?.. think of a preist dying, this Killa's got no chance in hell!!.. Have ya flow freeze and leave ya nose broke from me swingin' a bat!.. His (w)raps is plastic, shit was so easy to rip I feel I should thank the kat!!.. Ya name.. I'm trashin on it, my punches land harder than crashin comets!.. ya spits are ass n vomit, ya dad put's dick to ya mouth cause ya askin' for it!!.. 16 bars 2 less than him... good luck, please let this count... sorry I was late... |
Vote Now, please.........
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Although i really liked the Ja Fool line my votes goin to Shanks.
He flowed betta and his wordplay aint bad. Good work from both peepz. VOTE => Shanks <= http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...0780#post400780 |
vote - shanks for better overall verse
killa u are elevatin but u gotta remember to rhyme playa. Some of ya lines deppressed me cuz they had good ideas then they didn't rhyme. Keep spittin, tho, u gettin there. Shanks - Classic Shanks... but the intro was gay. lol |
lol^
yeah... HA! |
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