DeVine -vs- Young Dee
 

Ok, Young Dee...I Talked Wit' The Admin. We Gotta Repost. So Let's Do It Again....I Still Got My Verse, So I'm Just Repostin It....


Rules ::
Text Battle
16 Line Min.
20 Line Max.
First To 5 Wins
4 - 0 = K.O.
~BLIND POST~
No Crew, Dickrydin', or Hatin' Votes

I'm Still Here, Never Left...Resposting My Verse Now.....

*P.S. To Anybody Who Voted, Please Place Your Votes Again, Due To Technical Difficulties With The Board Your Previous Votes And This Previous Thread Were Lost! Sorry.....Thanks!*

Ayo, This Cat Must Really Love Me, He's Usein My Audio-Name...
(DeVine = "The Young D")
I'ma Slaughta'-Ya-Fame, Slice Ya Head Back, Get Rid'a Part-O'Ya-Brain!...
Cause You Ain't Thinkin Straight, Your Mentallities All Twisted...
You The Missing Dwarf, So 'Ugly' Snow White Casted You As A Misfit!...
Lemme Break It Down For Ya, I'ma Show Ya What Ya Punches Do...
(...Brushes Shoulder...)
NUTTIN! So Weak Wit' Words No Wonder Record Labels Don't Want You!...
You A Newbie On RB, Don't Think It's The Same For Me...
I Was Here Back In The Day, Then Left To Play Wit' Vets On RC!...
You'll Never Be On My Level, I'll Assault Ya Like Sharp Notes To A Tenor...
Need To Bring Ya Phonie Style Straight To Whackness Emergency Center!...
(http://63.219.149.14/forum/forumdis...p?s=&forumid=55 - Go Here & Stop Embarrasin Yourself!)
This Cat Don't Want WAR, He Can't Box Wit' A God....
I'ma Treat This Battle Like How This Cat Uses His Brain - "ONE SIDE"!(one-sided)...
Young Dee, If Ya Haven't Noticed....Ya Set YOURSELF Up For Defeat....
This Battle's Far From Over And ALREADY You Got 2nd Seat!(2nd place)....
Dawg, To You My 'Tek Is Like Sunbrun', No Matter Which 'Season' We Meet...
Burn Straight Through Ya Skin, Turnin' Ya Flesh 'Red From The Heat'!...
Now Shall I Really Continue, Or Is It Clear That You've Completly Lost...
But Here's The Mic Son, Game's Already Over, Might As Well Take It & Walk!...
That Way Ya Got Something To Remember Me By, The Cat That Burnt The "Dee"...
So I'ma Just End It Here, Son...You're Just A WASTE OF A VERSE TO ME!!...
...DEFEATED!...

20 Lines Exactly...

GoodLuck....

...Patiently Waiting...

......::Crickets Chirp In The Background::......

ima be honest if your opponets anygood he's gonna win with ease your verse lacked creativty had some sloppy personals and punches some lines ran on to much as well just stating my opinion

^^^Thanks For The Love...Keep Uppin This Thread For Me, Will Ya!

Thanks Alot,
You're A Big Help!

...And Buddy, Just To Let Ya Know...Don't Reply Your 2 Cents Till My Opponent Posts. Again, Thanks For Uppin This For Me....

And If You Really Wanna Holla At Me, Get At Me On AIM...I'll Bring You To A Board That Makes This One Look Like An Elementary School. LoL.

Yo Devine!/ It's finally time!/
To de-virginalize your bunk ryhmes!/
You talk of getting twisted UP!/ but then you got and rolled up/ in a TITAN PHILLY blunt!/ and huffed and puffed like a fat chronic dime!/
I vomit fat chunks of corn/and tidbits of roast beef harder then your tightest rap while you were still in your prime!/
It's my time to shine!/ so back up/ or get shit on! /
I SPIT ON!/ Opposing, no game having phonies!
I'll treat you like a school girl turned freak/ Get you all wet/ then rip right your chon-ies!(panties in spanish)
You ain't knowing me homie/ make you retract your statment about " he can't box with a god"/ you's a fraud!/
I'll impale your chest with a flaming arrow, while creeping up outta the fog!/ leave you stiff like a muthafuccen log/
growing algea!/
wondering how'd he!/ blow me outta the water/

VOTE_VOTE_VOTE_VOTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

DeVine- ur punches weren't strong enough 2 make a fuller impact.
you length was good though.

YOUNG DEE- ur punches were harder (not alot) but then ur length let u down.

so this was hard 2 vote on but i'm goin 2 go wit Young Dee.
Vote = Young Dee

^^^Crack Smoker.....

It Ain't Just Based On Punches Son.....

You Gotta Take Punches, Flow, Creativity, Etc. Into Concideration...But I'll Let Young Dee Get That Vote.


BUT FROM NOW ON....WHOEVER VOTES....TAKE FLOW, PUNCHES, CREATIVITY, VOCAB, MULTI'S, WORDPLAY, ETC. INTO CONCIDERATION....DON'T VOTE ON ONE PERSON BECAUSE YOU THINK HE/SHE HAS 1 BETTER THING......IF THAT'S HOW YOU VOTE, THEN DAMN YALL NEED SOME VOTING ADVICE...

OH Damn! Can You Sayn "DQ"?!?

Dawg, I Already Explained To You Before What Blind Post Rule Meant, And You Said "Aight" And More.

But If I Read Correctly, You DIDN'T Follow That Rule.....Here's The Proof!

This Cat Don't Want WAR, He Can't Box Wit' A God....
I'ma Treat This Battle Like How This Cat Uses His Brain - "ONE SIDE"!(one-sided)... - DeVine

"make you retract your statment about " he can't box with a god"/" - Young Dee


Dawg, You Broke The Rules....So This Should Be A DQ....But I'ma Be Nice To You And All...So We'll Keep This Going....Just Wanted To Point Out That You Didn't Follow The Rules Homie....

That Shit Can Play An Effect On How People Vote! Just Some 4-1-1 For Ya Young Dee...

Uppin For Votes!

WTF R yall talking About...I mean Devine did come soft as suga packets but did yall even read youngs verse...he came soft as ketchup....and I like suger more than ketchup..becuase suger flows better..GET IT

young had no flow..those wack punches werent enough to help him

vote DeVINE

Aight, Thanks....1 - 1 Tied Off....Waitin For More Votes

yo im sicka people sayin "you cant use my freestyle against me. Don't quote my freestyle." Thats a pussy ass rule that only the little bitches on this forum make. anyway...

you both need to elevate your skills a lot. Devine was less wack tho. It was close but I vote devine.

Sorry Young Dee. Practice your flow. I got more respect for you tho. Keep your head up

~1~

^^^Thanks For The Love Chump...Preciate It!

Damn, I Guess Yall Don't Know The Differance Between A KEYSTYLE & WRITTEN Work.

As For "Blind Post" Rule....Well, Since It's Text Battles And Not Face-To-Face Real Battles...It's Better To Have The Blind Post Rule So Mu'Fucka's Don't Just Sit Down And Play Off Your Verse...If They Did, Then EVERY Fuckin Battle Would Be Uneven To A Certain Extent. That's Why There's A Such Thing Called "Blind Post"....It's Obvious Why The Rule Gets Enforced In Battles....

Splitiviticus, I Love People Like You....The WAAAAY To Over Cocky One's....Yall Crack Me Up. Hahahaha. You Act As Though I Sat Down And Tried To Write This Shit....Naaauh Fam, Can You Say "Keystyle"!?!

Dawg, I Was Done This Verse In Less Than 12 Min.'s, So Don't Make Remarks That I Lack Ability Homie....When It Comes To Written Shit...Like Topics Or Open Mics Or Whatever....I Shit On Kids Like You! Hahahaha.

Some W.O.W.(Words Of Wisdom) For Ya....Think Before Ya Speek Homie, Make Sure Ya Homework On Somebody Is Filled Out And Correct.

Oh Yeah,.....Thanks For The Vote!

Uppin For More Votes.....

2 - 1 My Favor.

devine absoulutly destroyed him...devine gets my vote