My iLLesT AnGYeL
 

This Is A Poem For My Girlfriend, aka iLLesT AnGYeL.....


Blessed With Beautiful Eyes, The Most Attractive I've Met Eyes-With//
You've Melted My Frozen Heart, Like Continuous Heat To Ice-Siccs//(Ice Siccles)
And Your Poems Are Graces Of God, I Never For A Second Thought To Doubt-You//
I Used To Wake Up To Cold Sweats And Tears, Those Were The Days I Was Without-You//
All I Want For You Is What's Best, And Nothing Less//
Imploding Chests, But I'm Blessed To Have A Partner Like You To Help Me Through Stress//
Despite The Fact We've Hurt Each Other In The Past, We've Passed On//
To Reveal Each Other's Hearts, And Realize Us Together Was Home All Along//
I Was Blinded By Friends, Now I Realize Your The Only One//
And Even When We Fuss And Fight At Night, It's Still Fun//(As Long As It's With You...:D)
Remember The Night We Spent At Chris's And We Slept-Together?//
With You I Could Sleep Through Anything, Stormy Sunny, Or Wet-Weather//
My Head Is Clear, And I Know I Get Mad At The Littlest Things//
But It's Because I'm Too Worried About Not Screwing Up, So I CAN Present You That Ring//
I Love You More Than Love Itself, And Sometimes It Doesn't Show//
And Sometimes I Feel Like I'm In A Boat With No Paddle, And I'm Mad Because It Doesn't Go//
You Are The Twinkle In My Eye, The Sparkle In My Smile//
And I'm Impressed That We Can Rest To Take Care Out Of Our Child//
Even Though At Times We Feel Strangled, Our Love Will Forever Remain Entangled//
I Could Never Replace-You Or Hate-You, Because Baby Your My "iLLesT AnGYeL"//

And I Meant That.....It Came Straight From The Heart....


Now Gimme Some Feedback Peeps


-OuT-

AwWwW...damn..other than that made me cry it was soo good! i love you baby..<And Your Poems Are Graces Of God, I Never For A Second Thought To Doubt-You//
I Used To Wake Up To Cold Sweats And Tears, Those Were The Days I Was Without-You//> BEST LINES
i was really feelin thys baby..nice...i love you...1!

LoL, Thanx, But I Am Mad At U At The Moment....:(......


ByE

Re: My iLLesT AnGYeL
 

daaaaaaaaaaaaaaamn....

thAts d' BeSt lines....felt so deep thaT it AlmOst maDe mY heArt melt.....

madd deep...it feels so good that there are still guys who are sooooooo damn romantic.....makes me weak in the knees....

well for whatever its worth....definitely superb!......

messages to a special someone came straight from the heart...

bottom line....nice job..hope to see more of ur works....

Awww...that's so cute!

But all in all....nice drop.....

I especially liked the opener

very nice, give me butterfliesreturn da favour at http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...8197#post388197

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yo that was pretty tight dawg...glad u wrote somethin bout ur gurl..keep it up

Thanx^^^^ Preciate The Feedback.....