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Opedogg 04-29-03 11:45 AM

So Many
 
(singing)
SO.................MANY
TIME...........CHANGES
RHYME........PHASES
CRIME.........PLACE....

(verse)
..never thought that pot would make me dumb as a rock/
I have fun wit a glock, a poor man that love what he got/
But now I see another view on life to make you do whats right/
to much Wine and a bitch that you got to watch or else, she'll screw that guy/
and ive been wasting to much time on so many problems/
Take caution but im still in the gutter beat down and crawlin/
so many backstabbin backpackers who take your game faster/
than wack rappers in rap battles but fuck it it doesnt matter!/

I'll have to finish it sometime

NH 04-29-03 11:56 AM

hook was plain awfull man...how can ya sing it seriously?????? im not tryna beef just being honest

as for the verse.. hella simplistic no multies vocab needs uppin majourly

"never thought that pot would make me as dumb as a rock"

well it no it wouldnt anyway cause when your high on weed you think alot more than you would sobre...so that was a dumb line

you have some potential but you need alot of work man


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