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Saladin 04-29-03 03:17 PM

...Stratusensuality...
 
Been a minute since I dabbled in erotica...but check it.....










She...

Lives...

To...

Descend...

To...

Me...


...In Winter morning's voice to lilt whimsical silhouette befuddled but beckoning for this beauty's warmth all over me, melting her waist on my face as I hum lullabies twixt parted thighs to bring Summer to her knees, and juices to Fall, flooding what's been begging for culmination for deca-seasons in seams, of course she gets wet in my dreams, preluding reality of my rocking tongue bathing in her streams, it seems the schemes to cream a deemed goddess inevitably slides into sinful forays with her lips rolling like waves down my tip to crown me king of her domain mixing pain and pleasure with days of measure, I've been made to treasure her in this now and maybe forever as....

I...

Die...

To...

Ascend...

To...

Her...


Peace
onE

~RuThLEss~ 04-29-03 03:18 PM

^^^^^^^^LOOOOL nice topic yo.....but dawg Control yo hormones....loool


peep mine a Vision

Saladin 04-29-03 03:33 PM

Aight dunz...
uppin this...

varentao 04-30-03 02:08 PM

Liked this a lot...

...you really put a new edge on the subject in hand...good use of imagery...original approach...really got right into it and depicted some beautiful and even explicit things...

..er...resp...

Saladin 04-30-03 06:29 PM

Thanks duke...

Saladin 05-13-03 07:37 PM

uppin this for the queens

TamairaSanders 05-13-03 07:43 PM

who boy, i really liked that boo

Saladin 05-13-03 07:45 PM

thanks ma..

appreciate ya opinion..;)

Legendary 05-13-03 09:12 PM

lol, I really liked this. Very graphic :D I should say that again. It was very graphic. Nice post, though.

nunother 05-13-03 10:28 PM

dont know if i should admit it but i liked it, it was intriguing...i started and wanted to finish reading it...u took a good approach to the subject~ complements...

DaGyrlRemarqabL 05-13-03 10:34 PM

I was feelin this A LOT. Most of the pieces with this topic come out kinda trashy but I must say that was BEAUTIFULLY written, elegant in its words and deep in its emotion. Really feelin it a lot. You got mad skillz and i Mean that. Keep an eye out for more of your shit.
Pz n Propz.

Saladin 05-14-03 10:17 AM

Thanks for the love..

shiznit 05-14-03 01:32 PM

really interesting....i liked it actually ... it was very graphically enhanced or lets just say nice concept....keep droppin!

Tha Linez Drawn 05-14-03 04:54 PM

Ummm...Saladin, no comment: Marriage is half of your deen....peace


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