my new style
 

i got my nikes therefore i check it, im reppin\\
rhymes like weights, muscles iM gettn\\
i let the rhymes take\\
over your minds i leave ya mind to ache\\
the mind makes, explosions of thoughts like a mine makes\\
like a blind date, im leavin you nervous //
im droppin shit like a seagul except people, i spit lethal verses\\
call tha nurse im spittin illegal curses//
i leap in the circuit , leave you leapin to ur cathedral service\\
im evil like tha deevil ( devil ), im certain\\
im certain, that within time/ im workin persons dimmed frickin
minds//
in time, ill be the emcee to deliver wicked rhymes//
tha sickest rhymes, call them tha flue, a migraine, or an itch in ya mind//
i migrate to ur mind\\
when i shine, call me the bullet\\
no bullshit my minds the trigger i pull it\\
grab ya stool kids, my levels growin like tulips\\
no foolin two lips on my dick. get it...shall i cool it?\\
how when im hotta than fuses or fuel lit\\
like cool whip, im white\\
i get ideas without the vision of tha light\\
critisism i fight, wiht my mic, like tyson, im givin bites\\
to the ears of the emcees slippin like ice\\

tryin out a new style, any tips?

lookin for soem tips hre

pretty good yo .. keep it up and maybe chuck in a few more multis