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NRG 04-30-03 06:32 AM

2 Rounds:NRG vs Clouis
 
Yo listen up I host this battle so i'm stuck,
Destined to win, you just a dum fuck/
Should put a bag on yo head, ya flow won't light the fuse/
Ya look at kids, police gone get you cos its child abuse/
Told ya before, to stop sucking dick for a dollar/
Especially when its from yo mama/
You not her son,you her daughter/
You wannabe, don't try pretend that you Carl Louis/
i'll end it for you/
like his career ended with drugs, but yours is worst than that/
Ya lost the race before it started,ya got hit with a gat/
10 times rite where it hurts/
On the floor, is where ya verse is at/
Aint got no class, using a white girls ass/
For your picture/
Heard you a hoe, take a dick for a picture/
Of yo ass/
Ya claim u black, I see that you white/
Aint got no rhythm or flow, Ya shudn't bother to fight/
I just started, to mass perplex you/
i'll knock you back to ya house in the gutter/
Its my first battle,guarantee you on a loop of a stutter/

NRG 04-30-03 06:41 AM

Vote @ the end of the second round
No dick ridin votes
They must be justified

CLouis 04-30-03 02:05 PM

aight i aint punkin out i just saw the post
droppin soon..

CLouis 04-30-03 02:26 PM

So they call you NRG? you aint got enough lyrical endurance,
My flow leaves irrepairable damage like you aint got insurance,
After this post, obviously no need for voters to debate,
Fuck this newbie with 7 posts, he dont deserve to make it to eight
Ur shit dont hold weight, no question you need 2 be taught a lesson,
You want 2 rounds? your ass wont make it to the next session,
fuckin with fake background infromation,
i didnt know you were down for time wastin,
after this battle, you'll progress in reverse elevation,
underestimated what ur facin, cant compare to these rhymes,
take your wack ass back to London, yo its almost tea time,
U shoulda thought twice about pickin up a mic when you grabbed it, fuckin faggot, i lost before the race? this is like the fuckin turtle and the rabbit,
You act like your raps is phasin, this cats dick cravin,
fuckin with another foreign faggot that thinks his styles amazin,
fuckin amateur, probly cut himself from the first time shavin
say I claim shit? the funny thing is that I'm actually caucasian...

CLouis 04-30-03 02:28 PM

lol uppin votes

Chrit 04-30-03 02:29 PM

goin with ckouis on this

his punches connected much harder

peep me vs killa t

and check my rbbl battle vs waur

CLouis 04-30-03 02:30 PM

aight thanks.. deff will check the battle

1-0

CLouis 04-30-03 03:33 PM

uppin for votes..

D@ShSkiT 04-30-03 03:45 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by CLouis
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take your wack ass back to London, yo its almost tea time,


LMAO.......It's jus funny too me.....But vote Clouis.......Way harder hitting punchs.......and better flow......

Vote on my battle vs vertex yall............

NRG 04-30-03 06:20 PM

yo i gotta give it 2 ya dat shit woz tight

ShYLo 04-30-03 06:25 PM

To Me The Harder Hitting Punches Came From..

My VoTe - CLouis

CLouis 04-30-03 06:35 PM

3-0 ko..

uppin votes

NRG 04-30-03 07:12 PM

Yo wot the fuck you chattin about, i cant make it 8/
may not post as much but its yo interlect in debate/
i can't go back to London,i ain't moving and i ain't left/
you dunno where you live,and that first round was jus a test/
i never underestimate,you the one battling rookies/
eDUB,a waste of time,both was shit, like uncooked cookies/
ya flows sparatic,i see that you lacking the lyrical range/
if ya was hotter than the sun, still would lack lyrical flame/
yo this my lesson, i may be new but in this i am the teacher/
you should pre-write ya lyrics,dictionaries wouldn't hurt either/
when i end this battle, doctors say 'Clouis a bleeder'/
you should move out yo bin,cos i heard a junk yard is cleaner/

give up, the doors are closed for eminem wannabes/
last week,vanilla ice asked you to form a group 'please'/
oh yer the race, of course i'm the turtle and you the rabbit/
its cos the rookie got the win the rabbit just couldn't have it/
i take the mic,do audio battles,rule it like julius Ceaser/
you shouldn't think,oh no you thunk,the mic be giving u siezures/
i may not win but like a baby,i'm the one shaking the rattle/
you better step up,if I lose,at least it was a good battle.

CLouis 04-30-03 07:57 PM

look..

yo i thought ud smarten up and be seein this crap,
but truth is, round two's wacker then ur previous rap
i was wrong for thinkin that you'd see the trouble in it,
you probly just posted round two to make it into double digits,
go battle another newbie, your style is fuckin faded
yo thanks 4 repeatin my rhyme in the first line, it was appreciated,
wannabe eminem?, round one was a fair glance,
you couldnt last one ROUND, your song should be 'SQUARE dance'
we could sit here for a while, just fuckin dissin each other,
but, 'Yo, Lets Get Outta Here', and, 'word to ya motha'
yeah edub was a waste, ko'd that shit, what, nobody told ya?
oh yea, i forgot, you was too busy tryin to challenge cobra,
dont step if u dont kno what ur gettin into with CLouis,
think you can rule like Caesar? alright, then you can call me Brutus,
after this battle, cat will have your tongue like your lips got stapled,
yo NRG, you better beware the ides of April,
good battle? if thats what u call lookin 4 votes and seein none,
but thanks dogg for uppin my record to three and one...

CLouis 04-30-03 08:01 PM

uppin votes


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