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KiD_fRozT 04-30-03 02:12 PM

this is the girl pissed me off rhyme
 
Ok im in "Ober's" class so i gotta diss
the shit i got handed just made me pissed
last night i was whipped cause i let my mental slip
now she thinkin she can take me fo a trip
but ima flip this verse like i had some time to rehearse
takin all this shit ill end up in a herse
cause the curse lays in her eyes
the one thing i dispise filled my head up "beamed" me up
to enterprise
left me on my own so now i feel dismayed
the game that she done played left me nuttin to say
take away the pain im tired of spittin in re:verse
i concure im insecure but i keep my mind pure
so u cant lure me out into the open
i wont sit around an mope then
i dont worry i know how ta cope
talkin that shit get ur mouth washed-out wit liquid scope
ur games r like kid listenin to "slaves on dope"
no hope left maybe the pope can send a blessin
ease my mind no more stressin like i done fucked up
when we got ta messin u wanted me carressin
to rub u down have u in extasy like "herbal Essence"
i see u fettin i accomplished the goal got the pussy wet then
didnt do my duties like i lost my bet
done lost the match i met shit send me into fits
like i should call it quits end it like thats all thats it
i dont need this shit added 10 names to my new list
walk away with no whime or whisp
flake away like pillsbury burnt to a crisp
gave me a speech impediment like i just got a lisp
hopin this dont fall away pray ta god work magic this day
cause all ive done is leave a trail from my assault
looks like im the one whos frail
on a snipe hunt lookin for the holy grail
but all i found was a bunch of quail
they get no sale i will repay

v3rBz 04-30-03 02:23 PM

we all been there dawg cope aiight!!!!!

AngelicSheShe 04-30-03 02:47 PM

it was decent.... more word play and vocab... sorry if this shit's fo real.. we all go through it though.. dont no body act like men are innocent of this shit lol... OoNnEe

fo'trill 04-30-03 02:48 PM

i could see this as a speed rap but not as nything done at a slower pace. the subject and what you were talkin about was good but i wasn't really feeling the lyrics.

Bash 04-30-03 08:25 PM

decent drop

KiD_fRozT 05-01-03 02:54 PM

i just really needed to vent some frustration
i didnt put a lot of effort into it i just wanted to let go
of some feelins 100...
thanks for the support peeps


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