Beneath the surface..........
 

the world changes day by day but gets darker always/
dominated by media with one dimensional portraits/
other realms display only if u investigate, the picture emerges clearing flaws away /
gullible ignorance capitalised and realised by governments/
propaganda rife with lies composed of shit/
the truth outnumbered by lies covered up and passed off in disguise/
corporations and the state won't realise the demise cos money turns the world, greed the surmise/
if you look past the surface, scandals abound but plastered over, the news mis-interprets/
power in the hands of companies able to destroy, common people rendered incapable with information fabled like a decoy/
the truth is out there but rarely told, rip off the scab and see hidden reality unfold, matrix like in complexion maybe the bell has tolled/
subconsciously controlled almost an invisible shield, look into articles on the net and zines' all will be revealed/
it just seems to me the world is upside down, hard to walk around without a frown/
the rich get richer and the poor remain poor, it's all fuked up of the future i'm unsure, the reality is fake artificial and impure, how much more of this shit do we have to endure????

nice...yes it was lovely... i see improvment in the flow to it.. i didn't quite feel an actual flow to it... OoNnEe

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thanx for the feed back anyway

i liked it, i thought the flow was nice and i thought it had nice subjuect matter.

great flow, great word play everything was overall good

I really liked the vocab you used. I had a lot of trouble figuring out the flow. Probably would have been better as an audio spit.

thanks for the feed back.....i was goin for flow on this one

...........uppin

dope shit, tight keep droppin

uppin

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Preety ILL...Flowed like a charm..

do it again..

peace
one

all i could say is, u on ya way, when u get betta u goin drop sum bad shit, peeps think about, peace eazy

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^i'll peep urs if u give me some feedback