13] SKapone vs [20] CrookEd
 

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Post By.... Sunday
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Topic

Born to Die

check

its saturday my time,

do i take a win, or just move on?

Check ins can goto hell

I will be posting so you better post

Ight Im bettin this kid is No Showin

And this is an Ill topic So Im disappointed in myself for not havin anything really ready..

so heres my shit..

Yo-
Life as I live it will be filled with tough times and pains
Sure we're all born free but its garunteed we die in chains
A death in vain may be the sweetest sorrow on earths surface
Except to the souls that realize all along they've served a purpose
If I was worthless why would people love and care for me
Lay in a Hospital and stay from Vistiting hours Nine to Three
Used to be a religious man, was faithful to the one above
But the belief stopped as I felt decieved by the God I once loved
The Mutha Fucka Cheated me! I wasnt ready to perish
I had a family and kids with goals every moment I cherished
Soon to be burried all because some Kid was Drunk and driving
Watching Doctors Facial expressions told me theres no Surviving
Despised my remaining days but then a boy was rolled beside my bed
So sweet and Innocent he looked whith his eyes closed, I said
"Nurse Betty? Can you tell me why this boy is in this place?"
"His Heart skips a beat, We can transplant but we think its to late"
I knew my fate, The Lord had showed me the way I was to leave
Not in Disgrace but to exhale my breath to let another life breathe
A sight to see as the Light filled my eyes, not giving up but letting go
To eternally rest in peace and wait for my wife to come to better home
The beep was loud, Medics rushed in to see my face with a smile
And A note with the words "PLEASE READ SOON" as its title
They read it aloud-
Im proud to say that this is the only wish that I have
To donate my heart to the little boy who needs it more than bad
And I ask all, if I ever said my life was a waste , It was a Lie
In this time God made me realize that I was born to die

eD

Give me any comments if you would plz, I dont think he will show..

Peace

thats not right, what ever


Secretley its a well know fact [oxymoron intended]
See-to-me this holes gettin too black
Free-to-be every-thing i need-for-me
Sea-to-sea peeps be informing me
That i-cant-see past-the-fact, that-im-wack
But that doesnt matter, i shouldent try
Like genocide, suicide just seems so right
Tie the rope off and prepare, no fight
Speed shit up, cuz we born to die


Always strain to get your recognition
No matter if you wack, quit ur bitchin
Get back to the pad and pen, write with presision
Dreams and hope go together with dazzling fission
Everybody is united under one thing
The fact that they wanna rap, its their dream
While my mind scheme keeps me feined
I have to deal with it, its my reality
Even when your thoughts are corupt and undignified
You must stay strong, cuz you are born to die


Even when facin devestation by player hation
Always stay lacin ur ryhmes with determination
This demonstration against me is steadily tracin
My veins with death corrosin like 3rd world nations
But i remain strong, with lyrics i stay elevatin
All the time my dreams and hopes are separatin
Stay young and true to yourself with every try
I've said it enough, you know why,

Your Born To Die

you got a way with yo words it's almost absurd you stomped him to tha curb

i advertised the battle in chat, so i dunno who he was talkin about^^^^^

Both was nice betta then i could eva do, but s.f.c. had and even flow

^LMAO, Was That A Vote??? Anyways......Vote-Crook-Ed

Reasons:


Wordplay- Crook
Complex- Crook
Multi's-Other Guy, But They Weren't Dope.....
Overall- Crook.....

Nurse Betty? Can you tell me why this boy is in this place?"
"His Heart skips a beat, We can transplant but we think its to late"
I knew my fate, The Lord had showed me the way I was to leave
Not in Disgrace but to exhale my breath to let another life breathe
A sight to see as the Light filled my eyes, not giving up but letting go
To eternally rest in peace and wait for my wife to come to better home
The beep was loud, Medics rushed in to see my face with a smile
And A note with the words "PLEASE READ SOON" as its title
They read it aloud-
Im proud to say that this is the only wish that I have
To donate my heart to the little boy who needs it more than bad
And I ask all, if I ever said my life was a waste , It was a Lie
In this time God made me realize that I was born to die
^Those Were My Fav. Lines.....That Shit Was Deep Man......Good Ass Verse...

So My Vote Stands Crook-Ed


-OuT-

other guy?

< heres the name man

my vote is fro CrookEd... i j ust felt his verse more, made me kinda feel sorry for the person it was about... SFK's didn't do that

vt= CrookEd

upn

vote=CrookEd there was a better story and mechanics to his verse