8 Bars of My Heart
 

My "8 bars of Heart" My "8 bars of Heart"
I've been abu§ed and brui§ed in the heart/
§eem like I was doomed a§ I crept out the wound from the §tart/
When I was a baby I ate weed out the back §eat of my dad' § car/
That incident left me with a painful and permenant mental §car/
The world a§ I know it i§ full of pain and mental angui§h/
I wi§h pain wa§ more like match fire, ea§y to extingui§h/
referring to a match when its just lit


When I wa§ younger walking down the §treet I got stuck up/
Lightning fla§hed before my eye..........Thought I wa§ about to die/
Nigga a§ked me for $2 and I wa§ gonna give it to him not gonna lie/
Turned around and it wa§ my freind so I gue§§ I lucked up/

I have grey hair§ at i§xteen cuz I'm real stre§§ed
§till able so you could say that I'm real ble§§ed/

Before a tear §hed'§ down my eye I think about other§ wor§t off and decide not to cry/
I vi§ualize my§elf in §tarving ethoiopian'§ po§ition and notice how they barely §eem get by/
Next time you go through pain just remember it could be wor§t/
When going through pain ju§t realize that you're not the fir§t/

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not bad...

nice

thnx

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I like how it got me to think. Life is pretty rough kid... I know what cha mean... I feel ya

Nice imagery...Cud really imagine wut you were sayin...felt ya emotion...besides that everythin wuz tite also...nice drop, mayn.

the imagery was good....the emotion was felt, it was nice...it was predictable though, like i knew you were gonna end it on somethin optimistic by the middle of the 2nd stanza...it was good though, i can't front on it

thx for the response

SOMETIMES
I WISH I COULD DIE, YOU TO CAN FILL THE PAIN IN MY LIFE
THE PAIN OF A KNIFE IN THE BACK, THE WANTING FOR THE THINGS THAT I LACK. THE PAIN THAT I POUR INTO TRACKS.
THE PAIN THAT MANY MEN PUT INTO SACS. ITS DRASTIC
PAIN CHANGED ME INTO AN ADICT FOR AUTOMATICS
AND THE MATHMATICS OF THE STREET.
THUG + RED + BLUE = BEEF
NIC + DIME + OUNCE = Gs
KNOWLEDGE + UNITY + LOVE = PEACE
I WANT REST TILL THE EQUATION IS COMPLETE
STAY UP SOLJA, AFTER PAIN ALWAYS COMES RELIEF

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JSTACKS

that was tite man

Damnz,
Luv`n this ... was quite raw eith ur emotions
i could feel ur words very good!!
Much props ...

Really diggin ya style boo

Pz

that was hot to def, i'm lovin it