Dare69Devil versus Cameronj86
 

Alright here's the rules
no biting
no recyling
unlimited bars
no d\r votes
no hate votes
due in as soon as possible

Good Luck

The trajectory releases the bullet of the gun//
Sweat trickles down your cheeks, the further you run//
The herb you just smoked , for the time was fun//
But fuck the fun, your time is almost done//
You realize the people who loved you was none//
You know now, that the life you livedyou have not won//
I dun give a fuck, I'll pull the trigger//
You'll let out a shrilling... "fuck you nigger"//
Then you wake up in abserdity, your already dead//
You turned over and repeat what somebody said//
No natural causes... he took a blow to the head//
Nobody was found at the scene of the crime//
And nobody knows the exact time//
I ashed your spirit fall//
As the shadow of death crept and I fearfully saw it crawl//
You have no motion, your dead like a doll//
"Bang" the trigger went, that's it, that was all//
I walked away... slowly and alone//
Gonna roll a nice fatty now.. I am goin' home//

I can't kill ur rhymes cuz they were never alive
This aint storytime nigga, nor is it ur time 2 thrive
Dare69devil, didn't anyone tell u this:
"Battling me, is like jumpin buses without ur safe-ty helmets"
See, right there I put it in terms u understand
mayb I should dress up like a dude cuz we know "Juwanna Mann" (You wanna man)
If I came at u with beef u'd try 2 sue me
U've never smoked a doobie, fuck u never even smoked a newbie
U've never popped a bottle, never popped a gun
Never rolled up in a car, never rolled up a blunt
Only time u handle the gun is when u playing "duck hunt"
On ur super nintendo, lets b sensible
only time u ever reload lead is with ur mechanical pencil
My murders are UNTRACEABLE like broken stencils
Ur not on my page, I'm feard cuz ur not on my level
U bound 2 get burnt Like I DAREd u to 69 the DEVIL

lol, I got a little inspiration on this freestyle :)

WE NEED VOTES!!!

my bad for frepostin but fuk the prductions they can suck a dic tight battle but dare u got it

Alright, upping 4 votes...
The score is 1-0 to DD on da board and
1-0 to me on da polls

upping for more votes

I'm up 2-0 on the polls but i want some explained votes if possible

The trajectory releases the bullet of the gun//
Sweat trickles down your cheeks, the further you run//
The herb you just smoked , for the time was fun//
But fuck the fun, your time is almost done//
You realize the people who loved you was none//
You know now, that the life you livedyou have not won//
I dun give a fuck, I'll pull the trigger//
You'll let out a shrilling... "fuck you nigger"//
ALL DIS WAS ABSOLUTELY GAY

See, right there I put it in terms u understand
mayb I should dress up like a dude cuz we know "Juwanna Mann" (You wanna man)
THAT WAS THE BEST LINE IN THE WHOLE BATTLE

punches cameron
flow both9as usuall)
wordplay neither(at all)
multi's neither(none)
complexity cameron(the juwanna man line)
structure both(easy)
disses cameron(pretti nice)

overall cameron smoked dis kid

BATTLE ME somebody plz

v-Cameronj86

k, 1-1 in the thread
and 2-0 in the polls

oooohhhhhhhh vote cameron that shit was great, other guy u need better wordplay

alright any more votes?