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Yo mmm....this guy ask me to duet with him .....he sent his verse a couple days a go ...he aint online so i want u to tell me wat u think of this flow for the song
[hook] [RT]You are a lover; borrow Cupid's wings// [F]cos tomorrow, were gonna be like kings// [RT]Romeo dead; and Juliet, dead before// [F]it's only you baby, i truely adore// We got through the harsh times and the good// If only you knew how are love is beneficial // We share so much affection// Injection, that is what your love is like // It makes me feel very funny// when it goes all through my body// Your devoted when we make love// com’ here boy you better give me a hug// My passion for you has suddenly elevated// I dread the day we get separated// It be like my world had crashed down around me// How did we meet?// Was it just fate?// I don’t think so, We were born for each other// The very first time I layed eyes on you// I wanted to get intimate// Wishes do come true // ’Cos last time I wished and I found you// I love you baby// 2003 Romeo and Juliet// [hook] [RT]You are a lover; borrow Cupid's wings// [F]cos tomorrow, were gonna be like kings// [RT]Romeo dead; and Juliet, dead before// [F]it's only you baby, i truely adore// |
yea dis i read 2 or 3 times dawg, i found if i read it super slow it was ight but that s my style so i liked it.
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yo zainy quit freepostin for real, and shortie i did not like this at all no rhythm very little rhymin in there vocab was not all that hot complexcity was seen i think that your boy could do better and hopefully you do better nuff said
odd gives it 1/2 mic of 5 |
yo man .......do u even know wat beat i was writng this too?
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