Yo I am new Tell me how this sounds!
 

YO i spit stroms of sorms of war with the stuff that i say//I pray for better days for these rappers that are lame//Its not all ways about fame//Most of these rappers are plan//more like hip popper that found their way in the game//its insane in a funny type way//its like everone wants to be a gangsta in this time of day//Its no reason why you want to be a thug//it not fun feeling hot slugs.

bad

like my boy Carson said , , , "Whack"

FROM 0 TO 10, I GIVE IT ABOUT A 31/2 SERIOUSLY

Yo thanks u for telling me that.I'll work harder!

U know what fuck ya'll

"pray for better days for these rappers that are lame" sounds like sumthin 2pac'd say!

also, don;t spit in paragraoh form, it is easy to do it like,

YO i spit stroms of sorms of war with the stuff that i say//
I pray for better days for these rappers that are lame//
Its not all ways about fame//