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Narcicyst 05-02-03 08:16 AM

A Complex Rhyme Part II
 
fix you, and put your soul to this use, to control and dig your hole/
witness homes, nature controlled, a vivid truth, from kids that're shelled/
hold your own like hugging family, and hope for help/
i know it wont melt away, skeletal shelter aids/
heretical belts and tapes recorded and sold in plain/
i feel hell, caves tumbling while we rave,humbling our behvior/
and taste nothing of this sweetness/
is it love our your neatness, in your animal thoughts/
to enslave what the mandible taught/
and segregated like schools in United Arab Emirates/
my fist have fighted but the Jinn is biting a genocidal/
wishes of violence, this life's a bitch in hyphins (dog eat dog)/
miss your life in this system, just divided/
and from army bought to beef, call it wrong and misguided/
they fuck you for no time, wasted, define civilization/
this industrial growth, instead of natural trust on this globe/
the sustanence fro, like African hair picked and strolled/
feel the math in the air, from social construct in sickening quotes/
North American psychoanalysis, abort your mirrors/
and self reflection corporate spirits/
you want freedom? the concept doesnt exist/
or the process wouldnt persist,to reach a bend/
insist to teach your men and reach your friend/
speak the end, the hearts feeling towards, feeling the sword/
but the pen is mighter than men in higher states of higher prior demises/
leaving denial, uncivilized cultural confinement of minds/
and sculptures designed with vultures beside them/
also inside stomachs, concealed are puppets and wires/
its hard to cash a brass heartely/
status feeling the the Ba'ath party....

WORD~PERFECT 05-02-03 08:51 AM

as expected this was well worth the read i enjoyed through and found peaces where i was mopst impressed-

Narcicyst 05-02-03 08:57 AM

thanks dunny...you should readpart one its somuch better...anyways whats happening with that collab we always talk about...we gotta drop that shit namsayin...good looking out..wahid

WORD~PERFECT 05-02-03 08:59 AM

im down when you give th eword

Narcicyst 05-02-03 09:02 AM

checkyour pm's dunny

Narcicyst 05-02-03 09:29 AM

uppin

Narcicyst 05-03-03 05:15 AM

uppin

tRiLL 05-03-03 05:35 AM

the first was i liked better, but this was a dope drop indeed

hit my shit up please its called "Remaining Unregocnized Part 1"
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...8513#post398513

Narcicyst 05-03-03 12:46 PM

thanks dunny...imma hit up all the shit you drop cuz fools always sleep on the dope shit in here namsayin...but the ones that fall off like a rectal prolapse get recognized?!?...oh well good looking out namsayin...wahid


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