Aim at Building (freestyle)
 

they bought us, souls sold for profits/
fold your dollars, and hopr your children dont get lost like Hatta/
lets aim at building like Mohammed A'atta/
kats that claim to put out on a higher status, i'm feelin few so panic/
if you dont like what i put out, let me know like refusing salads/
heart pounding pounding balance, social satire mark you with words/
skin talks, ignorant shit, i rip your face off/
look you handing out jerseys to get props/
news flash i spit the sports front page cough/
12 bits by the killer i hurt the rape to shake yall/
pinch band break you off with low frequencies that sound nuts like baseballs/
first draft tendency, the pen draws angles to take off your corners rock/
street tagging, dodging rubix cubes avoiding writers block/
dont brag about my possesions, put yours into question, its all natural/
indivualistic characteristics, what have you/
like its hard for me, hungry money kats too/
who spend eternitiy to end love between whites arabs and jews/
if we all looked out for each other, it would be trust worth rap crews/
we'd be better off like dysfunctional hands, now thats true/
hoping neighborhoods with no crack viles, blood forced to flow back/
more fronting like you met Nicholson especially when you dont know Jack/
seeking my pen to holler at men, asking who evacuated/
like swedish lving rooms, i'm a manual and just trying to make it/
royal family, proporganda and speech changes/
photography lenses see thru thick glass without bending or breaking/
life is your gift, i shake music to what i see it as/
more limits and gimmicks, 14 meter hurdles is what i'm leaping at/
i hope you ignore those telling you what you could or couldnt do/
on this terrain a single brain is just too much when put to use/
i'm always gonna be me, true to what i'm living to do/
that's the reason why i cant hold back like a crippled masseuse...

This was dope man...I peeped ya other stuff too but haven't had tha time to reply...I ain't really got time to break tha piece down...But it was dope...tha context...tha vocab...etc...Nice piece man...And check ur PM's...I sent U sumthin'...Peace

im loven it this shit is so dope,im fienden for the next fix.

cant hold back like a crippled massusse...haha yous the witty cat...hahha...tight spit narc...as always,tighten and itll be on point like heroine junkies nahmean..

like its hard for me, hungry money kats too/
who spend eternitiy to end love between whites arabs and jews/

^^foreal

trust.. droppin' hot bombs as usual.. the flow was sicc, wordplay and vocab were ill---> some nice similes and comparisons. overall this is one of the better things I seen from you, although u always skill.. keep uppin' hommie...

.Hot Joint.
 

Damn kid... this joint was vicious. I read the whole post very carefully, the shit kept my eyes on it. You a hot m.c., welcome to the fam, .La Familia.

great...
ill...
dope...
inspiring even..

just str8 up sick...

This was yet again a genious peice lol... it had a little humor to it also ... nice work buddy! OoNnEe

thanks for the feedbacks...glad you enjoyed that piece...look out for my new drops that shits gonna be insane namsayin...and if you got time peep some of my audio tracks the site is in my sig namsayin...wahid

i agree with everyone on this page, dope piece, witty as well

^^Agreein wit everyone everyone else has sed...Good vocab...ill flow...everythin wuz there..

If u have some time, plz return tha favor.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=43395

thanks people...i promise as soon as i have time i will check everyones drop...good looking out....wahid

yo this was hott shit. nice topic and just an overall good verse. damn good lyrics, and some good multis. good shit

could you peep either the warlords collabo or the younggadget diss? gracias

^^thanks dunny...and yah i will peep both of them namsayin...good looking out...wahid

a smart emcee... i like that. this was hot shit yo.... great wordplay and flow. imagery was amazing.... ill check out ur other shit