first flow
 

Words and phrases that rhyme/
fit geological time /
split you up like east and west/
request meridians prime/
to test the depressed obsessed unwelcome guest/
that has fixation in molestation/
grabbing titties and breast/
stabbing you in the chest/
pass the blunt to the left/
cuz more than 2 hits is theft/
hefty weight to be joking
smokin on j and tokin/
thinkin thoughts that's provoking/
put this dick in yer mouth and get to stroking/
the truth will evoke bring forth the choking/
phone booth your call is open/
or cannot be completed as dialed/
offspring, kin, or illegitimate child/
the strongest odor like a black & mild/
make sure my styles correctly filed/

you have to remember that this is my first flow
so be easy on a nigga

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this was good for ya first piece...kinda unclear what the topic is but nice job

it was str8

this drop was whack ,, no wordplay , lack metaphorz . lack vocab , , , elevate dawg