SmoothB vs Rise
 

rules:10 lines
No crew/No d.ryding/No hate votes
explained votes and poll votes will determine
check in and we shall begin

My b lets do it

Dude you flowin

I'ma bout to go out so let me hurry up and key this

even if you frenched a alphabet...you wouldnt "make out with a double-U":: (W)
fuck putting the shoe on the other foot, I'll "de-feet" you, and put the foot in the other shoe::
I'll spit twice..becuase you bite, and they'll notice a Double-chew::
and you wouldnt be "cold", even if you cought yourself another-Flew::

this is the wild west-now...on bombing test-grounds::
you could be a very honest parolee, and still wouldnt let your best-out::
you might get votes, just because peeps is glad, you stopped your audio-test-rounds::
so your not making me "nerve"ous, even if you pulled all-of-my-flesh-down::

Simple yet effective...lol....let me finish this

your punches-need-to-be-replaced,and like rice-cakes, seasoned-with-taste::
becuase they wouldnt "catch a contact", even if they blew weed-in-my-face::

I'm Out....hope you smooth enough...lol

Rise

hey lets finish this battle one verse thats weak

G.t keep that freeposting out of here...go to Botchslapped if you want a rematch

Up for smooth

Ok I guess I now have time to waste on you ready?

It's the mother fuckin empire, Smooth B! They told me to just roll with the punches but I got to hit back sometime..........Lets go!

When I was kickin in doors
Ya was shittin in floors
I was makin the money
Before you was learnin to pull up your drawers
I got a problem with winnin
If you don't believe me
I can prove it
When it comes to war
Im like NIKE
I just do it
And thats the way Its been since I was kid
My gun claps so fast
It requires a pentium chip

I went over the line limit because I had shorter bars so leniency should be shown

rise won smooth B wat was u thinkin u wack

obvious win.....rise all around verse again
yo if you need a crew, or a tag partner..holla back

more punches
more wordplay
more everything

vote Rise

Maybe Dejure...
Up for Poll votes

rise took this man to the next level by holdin his hand
holla

oh yea i cant poll vote, puter wont let me

Ok^^..thanx anyway
Up for votes

Rise you killed him man one vote up for rise man..i gotcha back

Up for poll votes

and peep my next battle vs StreetLegend

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=43493