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Artikqlit 05-03-03 11:55 AM

StreeTLegenD VS Rise
 
Iight...

10-15 lines
no crews, d/r, hater votes
Due Mon by 11:59 est time - I mite have it before this time but that's juss an estimate of tha time
3 in a row - KO
First ta 5 - Wins
Votes must be explained or they don't count
My style of voting...better than that poll shit
^^^

check in..

Artikqlit 05-03-03 11:57 AM

Oh if u do vote by usin poles...plz explain...break it down...don't juss fill it in...

NOTICE: not doin it by percent...

Rise 05-03-03 11:58 AM

It dosent matter how you want peeps to vote, the poll will decide the winner anyway...and I hop you didnt mean Monday, when you said mon.

I know its not gonna take you 2 days to post 15 lines!!!

Blas-Fem-Ous 05-03-03 12:18 PM

Ay...We'll come back & Vote on y'allz if u hit ourz up.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=43328

Rise 05-03-03 12:36 PM

Dam..O well..I'll just post now, you know why
because

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^^^These will be the only lines that will "come close" to mines::
you coulndt "Talk" & "Show" you will put this on "Lockdown",even if you "Hosted Crimes"::
saying "yo dawg, Street is ill", is a blatent lie, like saying "yo Oprah is fine"::
so I decapitate streets with his watch, so he can finally ryme, that he's a-head-of-his-time::

He's like the waiter at starbucks thats not clumsy,he'll never drop anything-hot::
So nothing "killer" will ever go into his CPU, even if he got his pentium-shot::
your lines just dont flow N'sync with each other, I think you need Plenty-of-PoP::
cause you couldnt put me on lock, if you brought Plenty-of-cops::

O yea and I forgot to tell you SL

when you were in Bitchslapped, and you said "Any takers"-I-smiled::
cuase Folks, I'm laying this "square to the ground", like a Bathroom maker-with-tiles::
his votes wouldnt "get up, High", if he was the Lakers-with-P.Styles::
I go to Egypt, and pull dude out of the water, Because StreetLegend is in Deniel(de-Nile)::

^^If you dont know what The Nile is, you dont deserve to vote..lol....let keep it movin

even If your verse "payed people to go Crazy", it wouldnt be "worth" anyones "Wild"::
this dude, Needs Help Now, like the Save the kids fondations, Streets is the "Philipinian child"::
so fuck Hot...if peeps measured verses in MpH's, you wouldnt even be "Miled"(mild)::

Oyea...I lied, I'm not new at battling Streets...lol...but you can see that for yourself...good luck..lol

Artikqlit 05-03-03 12:55 PM

I did...i posted that in tha call out forum..u accepted...if i get it in earlier i'll get it in...which i prolly will

Rise 05-03-03 01:01 PM

Its Ok dawg, take your time
post when possible

lilsmokey 05-03-03 01:04 PM

i'll vote when he spit check out mine please

Artikqlit 05-03-03 01:09 PM

lol...u lied? It's all guud tho

Rise 05-03-03 01:11 PM

lol

iight...enough freeposting
Up for Streets verse

13th Disciple 05-03-03 01:58 PM

Damn.....Post up......I'll hit this up when its done.....In the meantime Hit mine up wit Master Blaster....poll votes......1

Artikqlit 05-03-03 02:53 PM

Ok..i'm waay earlier than i thought so hear it iz:

Ya lied ta battle me, only ta get ur ass whooped//*
Fryin you in a pan, watchin tha heat 'RISE', as ya ass cooks//
Couldn't read a pic book...juss wud sit there givin me sick looks//**
Unda-estimatin me?...big mistake...gonna come out sayin "aww sook"//***

Elevation iz a good indication of wut u needa do//****
Usin ya like a public bathroom stall - shittin on you//
Total control...It's as if i'm Ashn yo-da Pickachu//*****
Touch Elmo's ass n then all yo cum'll spew//

I could put you inna hot-air-balloon n you still wudn't 'RISE'//
You're like a barney 'suit'...'hard' on tha outside n soft inside//
How does it feel ta hav a 13-year-ole deprive you of ya pride//
Look out...There's more ta come...i'm gonna rip off that disguise//

*said he wuz a newb at battlin which he's not juss ta battle me
**he didn't kno wut mon. wuz n sick...i meant as perverted
***"aww sook" - damn
****rise - elevation
*****ash n pickachu - peeps from 'Pokemon'


There's my verse...amatuerish..but i'll let y'all decide...

Rise 05-03-03 02:55 PM

Up for explained and poll votes

DeJureThaRaw 05-03-03 03:00 PM

breakdown

punches:Rise
wordplay:Rise
multis:Rise
flow:SL
technique:Rise
creativety:Rise

Murder....dam
yo SL, heres a tip, if you have to explain a punch like that it just takes from the verse.....but good shit to both

vote=Rise

Rise 05-03-03 03:04 PM

Ok up for more explained and Poll votes


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