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Wrecka 05-03-03 09:52 PM

Freestyle
 
ok lil freestyle

im new to rapbattles, flow so hard make heads rattle/
i dont diddle or daddle, i straight flow/
when i grip tha mic, i dont let go/
you gonna know, Wrecka, a usualy occurance/
better cover yaself, get some insurance/
i gots tha endurance, i can go untill eternity/
my rhymes burn, like a 3rd degree/
im currently, in tha midst of hittin tha big tyme/
but fa now, im coo just doin my rhymes/
stayin on my mind, like all tha time/
it should be a crime, cuz of how much i wreck/
chek ya retrospec, and try and guess whats next/
dont plex, or hate, cuz my rhymes procreate/
neva hesitate, ryhme statred at at 8/
and ends at 8:08, call it a scandle like watergate/
with one exception, i aint nixon/
u probably ditch diggin, while im pussy denten/
like lawinsky and clinton, ha i know i got ya grinnin/
these words that im mixin, go so hard/
i wreck with no regard, im careless/
ur rhymes have no elevation, aka airless/
beware this rhym is contagious, gettin copied on pages and pages/
u makin minimum wages, while im stackin franklins/
so i know tha lyrikal war still wrages, but i have no more patients/
i should be locked in cages, but ill get tha key back/
ps hit me up, i need some feedback/

Bash 05-03-03 10:07 PM

this drop was decent , , but wats diddle and daddle

Artikqlit 05-03-03 10:10 PM

Yo wrecka...This ArtikQlit of Raptism...Thought this drop wuz decent also...Some of tha lines could've been longer...could've showed more feeling..Keep postin mayn

SmoKeyThaBear 05-04-03 12:42 AM

it was alright but it could be better

tRiLL 05-04-03 06:55 AM

"you gonna know, Wrecka, a usualy occurance/
better cover yaself, get some insurance/
i gots tha endurance"
u was gettin sumwhere...... yo try n rap about a topic na'mean,
umm i think they mae a rule where u dont post freestyles in open mic na'mean, 3rd post it was alrite, i mean for a noobie,

but u know the old sayin (well not really old its just my sayin)
GET ELIVATED OR GET ELIMINATED

rapper_bigga 05-04-03 08:08 AM

YOU DONT DIDDLE AND DADDLE
MAN IF I THROUGH YOU IN THE DEEP END YOU WOULD PADDLE


nar thats was a ok freestyle....................

lyrikalmegaman 05-04-03 04:16 PM

wrecka i can tell u newbie dogg u need to upgrade ya flow that wuz decent but shitty compared to me
hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahhah ahahahahahaha


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