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Buffyangellover1 05-03-03 10:29 PM

Check this out my friend wrote it but it is tight
 
The World Forever turns
Check out the man I've found,
His skin tanish brown.
We love each other can't you see?
I love him, he loves me.

He shows how much he cares.
He calls me day to day to share,
How much he loves me, I can't bare.
I can see it in his stare

We love each other can't you tell?
He was there for me when i fell.
I'll love him til' the deepest sea goes dry.
This love i have, I show... I try.

Each others hearts we have to mend,
And when does our love end?
Forever deep out passion burns,
Never because the world forever turns.
By: tanisha james (12)
Dedicated to Joey

Buffyangellover1 05-03-03 10:46 PM

please tell me wut u think i would really appreciate it. thanx

[*¤ÐîMêØñФ* ] 05-03-03 10:58 PM

Was pretty tight ... liken it ...

Props to her!!

Pz

andrewalex25 05-04-03 10:40 AM

thats tight buffyangellover1!!!-keep it up!

Buffyangellover1 05-04-03 11:39 AM

My friend wrote that not me !


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