say i hope yall feel this - true feelingz
 

through all tha craziness and madness/ im pissed at this b1tch so i make a bad-wish/ u neva had this/ all tha pain that im foretakin/ since birth i been foresaken/ due to drugs and beef/ all i think of now is blowin tha green leaf/ this beligerant life seems reaped/ and left/ evryday a new threat/ threats and stress dont go together/ i still try my best even n rainy weather/ i could end it with a razor but i know im better/ just like a feather/ im light and fallin/ but fights really got me stallin/ i can hear death callin/ and my times about to come/ wish i could turn my head and run/ in the other direction/ the only mind ejection/ i get/ is when i write out all this sh1t/ so yall can feel it to/ ill spit tha truth til im fu<kin black and blue/ sick of Iraq and wurry/ But SWAY stepped back in a hurry/ u got cracked now sh1ts blurry/ just know my feelings cuz when im dropped u can atleast say u heard me/

*say yall hard timez right now down here where im at just spittin wut i feel hope yall can relate hit me back*

hmmmmm...no disrespect dunny but that was kinda wack...it was too simple for me...work on the structure of the words in your bars...add some complexity in there and a crazy ass word play and you got somethin...but this rhyme lacked all of that...keep elevating though...wahid

hold on dawg i gotcha im writtin something write now! whe im done check it out ight