my dad (sux)
 

my faggat -ass father,i hope he goes to hell,
but hes probaly goin to heaven,shit,o well
i sometimes wonder why he came to this world,
sometimes i wish he was wrapped up with bubble wrap and shipped straight to the dumb-shit world!!

Uhh that truthly Sucked

wow...

i am unbelievably amazed.. anything can be considered poetry, its art... but this... this bordered the line of being complete shit...

well...showed how felt but could have been better....

YEEEEEEEEEEP

..................... Riiiiiiight.

uhm.. just keep working on it u'll get it right

nice start...i like how simple it is...but here's the catch...if u make ur piece more descriptive and longer then u would feel different that u did better...

this was nice....keep droppin!

lol keep writing so i can keep laughing

that shit sounds so funny. hehe oh wellz im not larfin at his situation but i dont think he was feelin it. heheh ahahahahah.