Im NeW so TeLL me if im iight
 

Im a walkin time bomb about to explode, i got so many disses bout u, im on overload... yo suck blow// thats ur favorite name//they made a movie bout u..its called "I got no game...."//

ur rhymes keep mix n matchin//u cant even imagine//u got no chance to get eves SATISFACTION//...U mine as well get on stage with dress// NO wait my rhymes are more embaresing..n make a mess// what u confused? im jst watchin u choke, im ammused...ur mama sittin in the crowd screamin I still love u STU...

Well hit me back the end i ran into a brain freeze..

you're a newbie , , so i guess this drop was aight , ,,

wwwwhhhhhhhhhoooooaaaaaaaaaaa dawg that was so kiddy ! thats rite! ur shyt was makin a mess! haha ! my brother said it was wack ! haha i think it waws ok tho ! u need a lil more werk tho ! like use a bett voccab ! like use big werds!

bro yo shit was iight for a new guy, listen to advise specially bash n soldgier22, these guys now their shit.

cheak mine out
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=43893

That wuz iight for a newbie...but liek they said up ur vocab...

Return tha favor n gimme some feed:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=43879