a freewrite w/ Soultress
 

me
soul

remeber no ones perfect, but thats not a reason not 2 try.
cause when ya try that defines practice and practice makes perfection
perfection is foreseen in the eyes of children with imagination defying reality
To leap into unknown terrain with eyes closed, opening a new mentality
a mentality where lifes defies law truly living out freedom when it cries
where a person can realize there full potential thats locked in their mind
A place where logic sequence rationalizes cryptic fantasies this is but a thought
For within the mind the only boundaries are created from the doubt you haven't fought
to keep all of these matter facts mapping where many battles took act
burning mother earth to ash as weeds turn into concrete, burnt i relax
Tempted to intertwine with the candy stripe of eternal, I seek stillness
To relax in the tranquility of calm is something I've never had to miss
without being christmas i politely whisper to myself slightly a wish list
that one day we will acknowledge that theres no therapy in vengeance
Too seek solitude in revenge and yearn for retribution against such sins
Is not a weakness in ones self but more so a victory where no one wins
but if no could win would there still be enough reason to get up and fight
in a world burdened with so many wrongs, can i be guilty foe being right
Guilt is merely an emotion created only to discriminate against our power
To show mercy is to fear, a blind inside having u live ur life as a coward
thats when despair hits as life stays still i begin to drift putting stale rhyme in motion
defying slogans of discrimination when connecting culture worlds apart like the ocean
I would send to you a part of my soul to comfort you in these times of need
But fear it would drown in this sea that separates us, no rhyme can connect it's greed

Loved the poem, I kinda liked Soultress' verses better, they flowed a little better. I liked the collab, you guys must live near each other. Yo could you check out mine, here's a link.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=44567

Great work, both of you. You two seem to work well together.

~Shalom~

much thanx 2 the both of ya

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Re: a freewrite w/ Soultress
 

i really dig these lines.....very deep...great minds with talents when u put their ideas together...it would impact and produce such a perfect piece...i liked it a lot

hopin to read more of ur verses...keep em droppin!

Wow. Nice shit, youz twoz.
I really liked the last line from each of you. Powerful ending.
Good read all around.
Stay up n keep blessin us.
Pz.

thanx ya 2

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Wow, powerful piece... luved it.
You guys just make the perfect mix, tight lines from both of ya.
Dope collab... much respect

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Complemented each other well. Soultress being the heavy and dense over-tones. And then evil the undertones, more simple, allowing the reader to understand more better. The link for the reader if you would.

Actually, depending on how you read it. Evil you be the over tone, and soultress the undertone.

Either way, a good collab. It flowed well, an easy read.

...resp....

nice collab,you both do well together,keep droppin tha hottness.~1~

^^thanks every1

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