.These Are The Days.
 

I'm at the venue posin' for pictures//
Had to bless you by flowin' this scripture//
I wrote for my niggas to feel//
Try to relate, I rhyme out of hate//
For ignorance, this the naked evidence//
The case that E is in, corrupt judge//
Biased juries is given guilty decisions//
It's tough love, I feel this position is fucked up//
But necessary, I'll step to every cop and bust slugs//
When the prophet comes up from the cemetary//
I'm mentioned every hour, this here's legendary power//
Everybody fears God, especially the cowards//
Wierd guys worship statues all day//
Filling school buildings, classrooms, and hallways//
But don't learn a thing while chrome burners ring//
For dismissal of life like the missles that strike//
At targets when a hateful man marks it//
They say they wanna light the darkness//
But they fight the heartless, overprice the market//
I write this song so you niggas might respond//
With a little feedback, this little nigga need that//
Let's build, so I can chill a little, relax//
We got problems that we deal with on our kneecaps//
Long prayers in church buildings, earth's children//
Lost laying in hearse chillin', dirt spillin'//
For burial ceremonies, take the world to the grave//
Jewelry forever on me, these are the days...//

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Don't sleep on this joint!

uppin this tight peace.

nice flow, you could feel where the emphasis was put into the words and where the the sound popped.. str8 shit here, uppin' 4 mah boy..

aaaaaaaaaahahhahahah!
Armageddon, oh my god!
This is Camarac, i remember
you showed me the ropes
when i first joined here!
SHIT! Anyways, great piece
you have here, a couple of
the bars were a little short
and threw the flow a little,
nice imagery though, a few
more multi's, internals and
externals and this would be
better, but as it is, its a pretty
stand out piece, i enjoyed
reading it. Good drop 'Don.

Holla at my piece, see if ive improved!

Peace!