messenger vs. DETONATA
 

NO BITIN, NO HATER OR CREW VOTES
10-15 LINES
3-0 KO
SPIT FIRST

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Im here man, 10 lines?

read the rules nigga

^ I meant shall we both do 10 so it was an even battle, lol. .

grab the meat cleaver, Cut the Beef, and then hurt him
fuck a crowd, the only thing your drawing is the curtains!
steadily slurpin on cocks, your bitch is half mine
but my dick hates your girl, thats why its given her a hard time!
you shark lines from vets, then claim they just sound the same
so i'll take out Messenger, like i was uninstalling AIM!
claim your pimp, but i guess how many girls you've fucked,
cause you thought a Camels Toe, was at the end of its foot!
so you can ask who's the better emcee, but i'll tell you now. .
i hope you fucking die - but if you dont, its the thought that counts.

Yo
 

I thought 4 a minute u waz talking shit but i guess u ain't cuz yo verse waz quick
nigga i suck you dick, thats like a toothless bitch trying to spit
I bet you think you hot nigga, my rhymes steamin like a tea pot nigga
hard to handle, i'll have yo lil azz whinein nigga
You couldn't touch my rhymes even you stood on a bar stool
You think you hot nigga you couldn't touch stardum even if you waz a star on american idol
my rhymes flow fluint like im at my fuckin resitle
nigga you can't smell my skillzz like a stopped up nose
u chose to battle me im sorry u just caught a lost and u worked so hard
well it ain't my fault you awack azz mc
really i don't feel no pitty g
cuz its ova nigga and step up again and get bit by the cobra nigga

DETONATA
thought his spit was a bit better, Lryical u just need to elevate :)

cause you thought a Camels Toe, was at the end of its foot! - LMAO

Yo
 

I thought 4 a minute u waz talking shit but i guess u ain't cuz yo verse waz quick
nigga i suck you dick, thats like a toothless bitch trying to spit
I bet you think you hot nigga, my rhymes steamin like a tea pot nigga
hard to handle, i'll have yo lil azz whinein nigga
You couldn't touch my rhymes even you stood on a bar stool
You think you hot nigga you couldn't touch stardum even if you waz a star on american idol
my rhymes flow fluint like im at my fuckin resitle
nigga you can't smell my skillzz like a stopped up nose
u chose to battle me im sorry u just caught a lost and u worked so hard
well it ain't my fault you awack azz mc
really i don't feel no pitty g
cuz its ova nigga and step up again and get bit by the cobra nigga

VOTE => Detonata <=

Although both were good Detonater didnt overuse the word nigga.

Also it just attacked cleverly.

i respect that but rythmic you owe me a battle

vote=detonata
good shit nice flow
punches to
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