Shanks v5 86barsfromva (lol)
 

this is ridiculous.......

yes.. but I see it as Helpin tha guy out.. this tha only newbie/hurb battle I've ever had... He may elevate, or he may be better than what I see from him just bein' a newbie.. who know's..? He's not battled here yet.. It's all for fun, and he wanted to battle, so I ok'd it..

Don't freepost and clog this thread anymore please..

oh yeah I'll battle you next 13... don't reply talkin' shit or nothin, just PM me if you have somethin' to say, and I will let you know when I post tha thread in Elite..

Yo before I post I want to know wat (lol) means

I aint carin who aint feelin me, cuz I got stuff in effect right now

Now for the rhymes
1
I got guns dat rearrange ya chest/
Nigga I aim da tech and bust all da ottaries and veins in ya neck/
2
all you gotta do is tell how you tryin to get it poppin/
Im telling you strait up alladin ain’t gone be da only one on da carpet/
3
ask niggas won’t I clap ya best/
son, I throw ya lung in da air so you can catch ya breath/
4
Va 16 rappin da best/
They call my 9’s da twin towers cuz da bullets collapse in ya chest/
5
so who want beef not yall/
cuz when it jumps off yall da one’s flaggin down cop cars/
6
keep da flow nasty I aint worried if you aint hearin me/
I keep it street I guess dats why yall fags aint feelin me/
7
if you ain’t nigga you can get eat up/
be leavin wit shells in ya back like you layed in some peanuts/
8
you don’t want it im da best you faggot/
decide you want war, im in a trench coat wit da things in it like inspector gadget/
9
son im a banger out to get dat cheese/
nigga da only led you comin wit is da one’s you usin for ya SAT’s/
10
keep thinkin I won’t kill/
I’m da nicest da flow get uglier then tyrone hill/

Your turn

Represent son

Va’s finest, got da whole mob behind this

lol means laughin' out loud...

I'll post in a minute, I didn't think you'd post...

thanks for showin' up playah..

oK, hhhmmmmm Let's see... I'll *do* just enough ta fuckin' MERK

Tha Mob left ya hangin', after this ya real(eye's) a blind sight isn't bangin'!!..
a Va gangsta? hmmm what's new in R.B.? another i-net thug from tha streets?!..
Like Neo, I catch ya fake slugg's an bust in ya guts wit a thrusted index touch!..
Eat up ya lunch and cruch ya up crispy, call me treats, cause I speak sweetly!..
But I won't call ya sweety, PM'd wit a invite ta dick-ryde.. that's how he beat's me!!..
5 for some personal shit on this newbie
now tha *shit* get's serious
His spit is all play'd you'd think tha kid get's pussy.. "ok, so I pay'd ta get lay'd"..
OMG that's gay, duk can't get close so he feel's down his own cloths for chills!..
Kid you’re left in a waste, Ill rip & grip ya torso til you in a desolate state!..
Tension's pervade, you can hear my pin's drop...then catch tha grenade's!!..
watch his Proxy Serv. scream as i make your system bleed glitches!..
I hope your pussy's purty & clean.. no mis-take kidd i tend to EAT Bitches!!.



oK, I said 10-15 lines so this should do it... I may have done 1 more bar than you though, don't matter... rules are rules..

*Good luck & good battle kidd, ya not that badd... I thought you would of dropped really really wack, and then I would have had to school you on how shit's done... No need to now, you can elevate ya-self...*

*edit*

StayUp.

ummm............vote=dirty reason=merk......but i'll say this for the newb.........u came out better than other newbs......elevate........and use better wordplay.........other than that...........good job............................1

not bad both pretty fat. but vote goes to Dirty shanks betta flow n shit but other dude had sum sweet shit 2

come vote Brabbit vs ghetoowhiteboy

Upped for tha votah's....

2-0 Me

Anymore voters?