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Shanks v5 roux
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3-0 k.o. is in effect 10-15 lines no hate no d/r no bite no Rec. verses due in 3 hours Should be enough time, I'm doin another battle and workin on crew shit so, due in 3 hours.. |
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fuck this kid i'll bomb anyway//
go outta my way to ruin his day leave him with nothin to say better go pray cosmic explicatives flat out indicative// of the verbal fistin that leaves you leveled superlative the slave waits while the master baits// i guess you'll be waitin that must be frustraitin' i got an edge so sharp and straight i can't help but decapitate// put your skull on a plate even if i did come late incineration & creamation i got a deadly combination// of words too superb that hand out lyrical castration spray my sick shit at your face like i was "shootin craps"// words like steel traps snap close on ya raps more hot than tabassco, like mestration i flow// verses so atomic they glow while you know you just slow. sorry about the wait. g'head kid |
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*hey sway what ya say today wanna play?*HA! Duk Slipped from tha Crack of an Ass, wouldn't that be some Shit!.. Little Church Boy don't Puff Grass? Nah he Smokes tha Father's Dick!!.. His Sig say's he'll Die tryin', but reppin' InFuMuZ.. ya just tryin ta DIE!.. Ya learnin' ta fly, Right? Tonight ya Left alone high in tha Sky & Out of Sight!!.. landin' 10 month's away from Us..Not much, but I'm crushin' roux's ass to dust.!! Busted up and fucked all ta hell, that's right... I sold ya pussy for tha Devil's tail!!.. Tall tale's sell well, but before roux was flipin' a verse peep's knew U was bullshittin'!.. Now to Kill tha Kitten roux can't hit NoOo pussy... So he get's mad at My Dirty Mind State!.. noOo agility.. that's why he battles tryin' ta think while FUCKIN' STRAIGHT!!.. Be sure and peep his sig & other personals... Good luck & StayUp. |
I didn't really EnjOy this Battle Too Much.....I mean I seen Dirty Come Way TIghter Than That.........Roux.....I never Really Seen Ur stUff But I didN't Even Really Like Ur Flow.........Ur Lines Didn't Really Offer No WordPlay Or Punches Directed Personally Towards Dirty HardLy At All......U Used aLot Of Big Words But Its Seems As THough U Was findiN wORds That Rhymed Together....ANd Some Of theM DIDN't............DirTy.........Hell and Tail Don't Rhyme.....U Used Pretty Good WordpLay buT Like I sAId I seeN better.................All In All...........My vOTe Goes To dirtY FOr the Fact THat He Had puncHes Delivered DIrectly Towards Roux and USed Wordplay And Creativity............Thats Pretty much IT..............................................1
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Yeah ahh...Roux, half ya verse was just talkin yourself up man...U gotta get more punches on here...This line was the most felt by Shanks..
His Sig say's he'll Die tryin', but reppin' InFuMuZ.. ya just tryin ta DIE!.. Ya learnin' ta fly, Right? Tonight ya Left alone high in tha Sky & Out of Sight!!.. ^^That was pretty good but it wasn't the best from either sides, But Shanks def actually threw punches... Vote=Shanks |
Hell & tail does rhyme...? that's beside tha point though...
Of coarse I can come harder, I key'd this.. And really, read his verse.. would I need to come hard, no that would be a waste of time and good lines from effort.. This battle was walk in tha fuckin' park... Thank's for votes, and respect to roux.. StayUp. |
what is good in front lines is not so hot in elite. i gotta come up a lot to get wins in here. time to elevate.
thanks for the expirience though. |
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took the wprds out my mouth and yes thats exactly it whats good there aint here and Dirty drop a vote in my in TS slept on fuckin battle please |
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yea shanks ure shiit hit alot harder than roux...u had nice punches, those murdered him...i wasnt really feeln other dude anywayz, but he had sum arite shiit, Shanks killed this battle IMO...so
VOTE=SHANKS 1Luv J.Cin |
Im actually votin for roux. I said it and it flowed to me. Sounded alrite too.
Vote => Roux <= But wat would i know im a noob. So support the noobz. laugh at our crappy onez. And vote pleaz. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=1 |
Dirty took this one with more direct punches..more puches with won him this battle 'cuz rouz didn't really throw any.
ro's flow was o.k. but seemsed kinda forced..and Shanks pointed that out when he said, *hey sway what ya say today wanna play?*HA! vote= Dirty Shanks ya'll click on the link and vore on my battle with lyricbrutalizer http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=44438 |
3-1 in shanks favor. i guess it's over.
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